Nice. I like the Style you did it in.

The simple and clean look of the background doesn't match the style of your messy linework
Also, fire doesn't cast a shadow. Also, even though he's casting a shadow, there isn't any shading on him at all and that's just weird looking

Good guy Magus

You fucking asshole...

You will pay for this blasphemy...

LOL XD, got corrected it XD. Okay seriously now, tbh, i must say, THIS IS STILL 10X MUCH BETTER than others you see out there in the art forum section, not the very best, but yes i said it, still is the best out there you can find int the art section-1 LOL. although the casting shadows and the fire itself isn't correctly put, i would still give it a 7 out of 10 because of its good construct of the body and proportions. Talking about lightning and values? well, one could say however but depending on how realistic he want it to be, at this point, he pretty got it set up, and like i said, depend on how realistic he wants to go, maybe just add some really really simple cell shading and this would already be completed with no hassel or headeche, yet, would still kick those other art out there in the art section, so go easy on this guy XD, at least his work is completed unlike others that cant even finish the whole piece up and better yet, like "....." you can barely tell what it is or doesnt even have light and values at all but a simple glow effect FLASH surprisingly have for them.

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LOL XD, got corrected it XD. Okay seriously now, tbh, i must say, THIS IS STILL 10X MUCH BETTER than others you see out there in the art forum section, not the very best, but yes i said it, still is the best out there you can find int the art section-1 LOL. although the casting shadows and the fire itself isn't correctly put, i would still give it a 7 out of 10 because of its good construct of the body and proportions. Talking about lightning and values? well, one could say however but depending on how realistic he want it to be, at this point, he pretty got it set up, and like i said, depend on how realistic he wants to go, maybe just add some really really simple cell shading and this would already be completed with no hassel or headeche, yet, would still kick those other art out there in the art section, so go easy on this guy XD, at least his work is completed unlike others that cant even finish the whole piece up and better yet, like "....." you can barely tell what it is or doesnt even have light and values at all but a simple glow effect FLASH surprisingly have for them.

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