I haven't animated in a while :Y

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Aug 15, 2014 8:47 PM #1232609
lol same title as that Rik120
I was inspired by Syrius' last animation in his dojo showcase, so here I am with this shit : my ass

C&C please, thanks c:
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Aug 20, 2014 9:26 PM #1234806
why is it so damn slow
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Aug 22, 2014 2:36 PM #1235587
The animation is good overall, but damn speed it up a bit. Also, after the stickman finished the drop kick, he didn't even land and just proceeded to just do the kick in midair which defies the laws of physics..
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Aug 29, 2014 4:39 AM #1238004
Contrary to the popular opinion in this thread, I actually like the speed. I'd play around with the framing for attacks, maybe just take one or two frames out. I really like the over emphasized follow through.

EDIT: Came back, re-watched this a few times, wondering what it would look like if you didn't double frame your anticipation frames.

also fuck physics.
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Aug 29, 2014 4:42 AM #1238005
Quote from Mack
Contrary to the popular opinion in this thread, I actually like the speed. I'd play around with the framing for attacks, maybe just take one or two frames out. I really like the over emphasized follow through.


This.
The speed I think made it look like it had more force then the usual jabs and punches.
I wouldn't go with the popular belief going on here, I'd keep the speed. The only thing I might change is perhaps add an effect after the first kick, to show he somehow forced himself forwards instead of just swooshing like he did.