Hey all just 1 anim here atm its my fourts anim ive ever made so plz tell me wut u like bout it (if anything) lol and wut u dont like.
losts 4 stk fight

Moar anims on the way soon:Smile:

very good overall
just correct the stifness
the sticks are wobbly
try to work more on particles
i liked the animation

the only thing i didnt like was the fire. it shouldve had more then just an outline and a red filling. other then that, i wish it had either been longer, or had a bigger finishing move, like he jumps and his hands catch on fire, then he divesdown and theres an explosion, and the other guys laying on the ground.

Lol

First off, fix your grammer, you have plenty of time to post, so use correct spelling, it'll be better for us all.

The animation: Combo was nice, some parts had spot on force, some others lacked it, they grow slightly, keep it consistant, when the guy was comming down from the jump, he came down rather slow, you want to ease him down, and make him pick up speed. The first jump was nice, but next time, when you make cracks, try pulling down and also changing the outer brick, and not just drawing cracks, maybe a crater. Smooth, it was very smooth.
Particles, particles need some work, try not to make it all particilize at the same time, bigger parts will take longer to fully evaporate, and when the fire moves, it should leave a small trail that disapears behind it.
Keep on it, it was fun to watch.

Hi Grubber :]

I think you just have to practice more just make yourself a free afternoon sit to flash pick your mouse and practice.Watch others anims to see what they actually do (watch it frame by frame)