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Aug 19, 2014 10:04 PM #1234322
Pivoters, Flash users, mods, Artists, Venix
ive decided to tryout for metal new clan and this is wat i came up with so far :L
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Aug 19, 2014 11:46 PM #1234349
The stance of the lighter blue character is a bit odd. I'd have him standing at an angle. I would also suggest you change the floor color, it is too vibrant. Maybe a pasty brown of some sort. As for the eye (i think that is an eye) of the darker blue stick, i think you had a great idea for having that lens flare in there. My advice for you is to create that in a different way.

Here's a pivot animation I made that involved lens flares.
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Usually they go side to side, and not up and down, but for the eye i suggest both, as you have already done. Just use a different stick, like a simple line. It ought to do the trick.
The mouth (i think its a mouth) is pretty odd, it takes your view off other things because you try and decipher what it is. Try to make a more mouth like stick
If that's an eye, then put the other one there lol.

Due to there not being any movements, there isn't much to cnc. Good luck
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Aug 20, 2014 1:31 AM #1234400
i dont understand one thing u just said lol
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Aug 20, 2014 1:58 AM #1234413
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i dont understand one thing u just said lol


Then there's nothing we can do to help you
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Aug 20, 2014 2:45 AM #1234444
Do you speak english?
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Aug 20, 2014 3:32 AM #1234467
yes................... but wat he said was hard for me to understand -_-
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Aug 20, 2014 3:37 AM #1234468
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yes................... but wat he said was hard for me to understand -_-
I'll try, I'll try.

  • Change the color of your ground, it doesn't look 'earthy' enough.
  • Simplify the lens flare of the dark-blue stick
  • The mouth in the light-blue stick looks weird, unless that's an eye then add a second one.


Alternatively, I think you should turn the two ends in your 'lens flare' pointy since they look like triangles.

I'd scribble in MS Paint but...
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Aug 20, 2014 3:40 AM #1234469
lol
on the light blue one thats his eye xD And how u make flares
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Aug 27, 2014 3:21 AM #1237111
Mate
The eyes seem a bit low dont you think???
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Aug 28, 2014 5:05 AM #1237590
Xd.welll its kinda too late to.change dat