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Fight Practice #1

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Senzo

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Aug 23, 2014 3:35 AM #1235821
Just a simple practice thing I made.
http://www.fastswf.com/D7g4998
Mack

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Aug 29, 2014 4:45 AM #1238008
Ayyyy this is pretty good!

Not much to crit on animation wise, you seem to understand framing spacing etc. I'm trying to ignore the horribly short backs because there's nothing particularly wrong with them just a style choice I'm not too fond of.

All I can nitpick on is line quality, and maybe making it more complex. Some more enemies and obstacles, you could create some nice pieces!
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Sep 3, 2014 7:38 PM #1239837
Just work on your physics, and it will be perfect c:

Can you tell me where did you get these sounds, i need sounds c:.
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Sep 6, 2014 7:14 AM #1240707
the only thing i had to comment on is when the reddish guy fell down. to me it looks like he just blobbed up on the ground instead of falling over. other than that you have amazing talent.
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Sep 7, 2014 1:14 AM #1240903
Quote from notthebest
the only thing i had to comment on is when the reddish guy fell down. to me it looks like he just blobbed up on the ground instead of falling over. other than that you have amazing talent.


agreed.
That was fucking great. I couldn't see anything bad but that ^
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