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Some Practice:D

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metal
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Aug 25, 2014 11:50 AM #1236597
I made some practice:
Falling down (Click to Show)
Running (Click to Show)
Football (Click to Show)
Walking (Click to Show)
24 fps practice (Click to Show)
CNC PLEASE.....
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Aug 25, 2014 12:58 PM #1236620
Falling animation: Stick's movements seemed a bit too fast. Try duplicating them a bit more.

Running: Seemed as well a bit too fast with the legs. Hands should make bigger space between body and front arm should lift a bit more.

Football: Ball needs a bit more easing. In my opinion, arms looked kinda weird. Perhaps you should have made them move slightly less.

Walking: Dont really see anything wrong.

24Fps: More inbetweens needed. Everything is so fast, no force, no easing. When preparing for jump, he should bend more, push from the wall to make a backflip. Looks like he's just a puppet being controlled by someone.
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Aug 25, 2014 1:22 PM #1236632
Thanks you so much for the CnC:)
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Aug 25, 2014 2:44 PM #1236660
Its cool and my problem is doing the walking and running i cant do it normally >_<
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Aug 25, 2014 3:27 PM #1236667
You animate a lot like a older member, Re(z)gen.
Nice animations! Some things I noticed (which are mainly my opinions)
Falling: The lines are a bit big. Using smaller, thinner lines-transparent-will add a better effect. The stick also seems to move back and forth a bit fast.
Running: pls no 2 frame run. For your animating style try using 5 frames. I can't cnc this well, as I'm still working on it, too.
Football: The arms and legs moved without easing. Try using more frames.
Walking: Use more frames, and try to use the |-|--|---|--|-| easing for the arms and a |---|----|---| for the legs.
24FPS: Saintorin said what he needed to.
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Aug 25, 2014 4:16 PM #1236671
I don't know if it was just my device or what but the running seemed pretty choppy. I still suck at running/walking but I would suggest moving the arms more and more fluidly. :3
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Aug 25, 2014 11:19 PM #1236736
@Zexo: Sometimes you can do that...
@Ashero: I use 5 frames for the running maybe I will use 7 frames for it..anyways, thanks.
@Vanilla: Thanks!!
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