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Ven Ven VS Nauric

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Aug 27, 2014 8:10 PM #1237385
This battle is between Me and Venix,
Please all vote Fairly!

Venix's Part | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ne2gHeU-ssc

My Part | http://www.filz.us/view/d9a192cb-4b8/

Remeber to please vote fairly!
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Aug 27, 2014 8:59 PM #1237396
I waited for it since i saw your rhg first time, now i saw it, nautilus :D so here we go:
2 really great Pivot-animators.
Naut, this is a great animation, really smooth. Keep going with this!
Venix, another battle of this green stick :P nice animation aswell, not as smooth as naut's but nice to watch. your effects are good, i still miss some SFX instead of the music in all your videos. Also you should keep working on your smoothness.

I vote for Venix.
Naut, as i remember you said in your rhg page that you are a total beginner in animations, right? Technically this animation is just excellent, even better than Venix's. But in this battle, experience dominated. Venix has more experience, that's a fact. Keep animating, and focus on the fight itself, on the moves and all those other things :P
with your smooth animations, i am sure we will see some cool stuff in the future ;)
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Aug 27, 2014 10:08 PM #1237411
I voted for Naut.
His was easier to keep up with, and has more power to every hit.
The only general con about it was that it was not so long.

Ven, yours was good with the smoothness and angles and all, but there is not so much power to your attacks (My problem too)
And. . . the ending was corny. A big guy saying "I'm screwed." -- and stuff. :P

Anyways, good luck to you both.
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Aug 27, 2014 11:31 PM #1237441
Both of your animations were pretty much fluid in the movements, and the effects were pretty much decent. Though Naut's movements were a lot better than Venix. Though Venix had music. BUT I like good qualities instead of quantities. So Naut wins this one.
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Aug 28, 2014 2:05 AM #1237513
Both your animations are very good and fluid. I definitely liked the music Venix put in but that wasn't enough to make up for his slightly choppy animations, compared to Nauric.
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Aug 28, 2014 2:38 AM #1237529
mmm i'll give you tie:

Venix: Fine animation, nice music.

Naut: little better animation, no music.

Kinda even each other out. But still. Naut was a little better, and I liked Venix attempting angles, which i'll give a thumbsup! So I say tie
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Aug 28, 2014 3:30 AM #1237556
Nah Im a begginer but my cuz taught me everything I know abotu animating, Like literally and I looked at some tutorials on youtube, it really help with making the anim smoother and more like logic I think... Im sorry if I didn't seem like a noob but yeah I am. And all the cred goes to my cuz for teaching me over google hangouts lol
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Aug 28, 2014 5:39 AM #1237604
Wow, you did really good Naut.
You are the second pivot-user that has a chance aganist me.
It's gonna be close!

Anyways, i like your movements and the FAST mode changes.
Only one thing: i am not dark-green! My color is lighter.
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Aug 28, 2014 5:43 AM #1237605
Quote from Venix
Wow, you did really good Naut.
You are the second pivot-user that has a chance aganist me.
It's gonna be close!

Anyways, i like your movements and the FAST mode changes.
Only one thing: i am not dark-green! My color is lighter.


Oh crud, Im so sorry about thatm I guess I didn't look at the RHG to well, So if I include you in my next animations I'll make you light green! :D
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Aug 28, 2014 7:39 AM #1237635
They were both pretty smooth but Nauts battle choreography was better, he gets my vote!
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Aug 28, 2014 9:36 AM #1237664
Venix, you should really make longer deadlines for your battles... I mean, I saw your last battle less than a week ago.

Anyway, after examining these two carefully, I will cast my vote with some CnC, just cuz I'm in a Constructive mood.

Venix : Your animation, was, much, much better than all of your other animations. You improved so, so much it's scary. You showcased some of the filters and effects, along with the smoothness you never showed before, and I like that. Not to say that this was ideal when it comes to smoothness, but It is a nice level. The stick construction, and I will stick to my point, is one thing I hate about your animations. I hate it how your stickmen are so small, but I will let that go, that's just your style. The Backgrounds for each weren't detailed so I won't begin with that... Ewmm... The beginning was alright, and the ending was relatively nice. I liked the part where Nauric's weapon goes right trough you, though I didn't like that 3... 2... 1... counting.

Naut : Your animation was not surprising at all, I saw your talent in Pivot even since I saw your RHG. It was smooth, except for the beginning and when he shaked his head... Some of the effects were alright, though they could be improved from the lines to a bit of a more blury shape.. Anyway. The weapon movements and the grabbing were pretty advanced and are one of your best attributes. You also made a black background, which was a lot more detailed, considering you actually made ground reactions (such as when he smashes something in the ground). Ven Ven's movement was extremely well made. You even made sort of an angle closeup with the eye of Ven. I really liked this anim you made, because It is very fluid and smooth (for a beginner).

Final verdict : My vote goes to Naut, I hope you read the CnC before this, and not just skiped to the verdict, because I clearly explained why I liked the part made by Naut. Venix made a better part then ever, but unfortunately, Naut made a bit better.

This is all, just my opinion.
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Aug 28, 2014 9:46 AM #1237667
Im going Naut. the action... It blinds me.....
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Aug 28, 2014 1:09 PM #1237731
Nice Job Naut.

I know about your sound problems, hope you'll find a solution...
But even without the sound, your animation was smooth, interesting and we can almost "hear the broken bones". You tried to create angle too, which is nice. Knowing you are a beginner, that's even better. You rule mate, continue like that please. You get my vote too.

Venven, your animation was pretty good. But there's something I don't like about it, this is way too fast for me. Your character sure has many powers, so you want to show them all, but your swapping is so fact we can't really understand how Venven works and fight. He has so many identities in one second, I can't like or dislike his powers, because I don't really see or understand them. I think you should practice to create a more "storyboarded" animations, with pauses and real dialogs.

Good job, both of you !
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Aug 28, 2014 4:37 PM #1237793
i chose naut cuz i saw movements............. venix attempting angles- up top bro
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Aug 28, 2014 7:30 PM #1237819
both animations were great! gladiators like you two in a battle are pretty rare!
smoothness was at a high level for both anims both nauric's was a kinda better... he gets my vote
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