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two drawings.. opinions on what to improve?

sorry for this really short one, but I just wanna mention the second one lacks a good composition and a sense of perspective. can't really say much for the first, it's decent.

While these are interesting and all, I'm not really digging your use of colors and they'd probably be more eye catching if they were more detailed. And yes I understand the style of it, but detail doesn't always mean serious indepth shit, just like, fill in a bit more empty space or do some fancy shit with colors that make the piece stand out more

I like the first and last ones the most.
Since you don't seem to care for criticism, I won't do it, but there are a few problwms here and there
None of them are too big of a deal though, keep up the good work

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I like the first and last ones the most.
Since you don't seem to care for criticism, I won't do it, but there are a few problwms here and there
None of them are too big of a deal though, keep up the good work

So usually, copying a post from another topic word for word has some kind of underlying meaning to it, but I fail to see the relevance of this here.