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May 18, 2015 8:15 PM #1363341
advice: I wouldn't take advice from someone who's willing to give so much of it without asking simple questions like that first.

"Wow he sure spends a lot of time talking about his weaknesses, m̶a̶y̶b̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶'̶s̶ ̶p̶a̶r̶t̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶e̶s̶s̶a̶y̶ ̶r̶e̶q̶u̶i̶r̶e̶m̶e̶n̶t̶s̶ nigga get rid of all of it what the fuck are you doing"
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May 18, 2015 8:17 PM #1363342
yeah but if I were an employer, I'd expect to see:

"One of my weaknesses could be being hesitant of making friends. I'm a generally quiet guy, and although this behavior hasn't hindered my work process, it hinders my ability to fully get involved with the company. Given enough time, I'm sure I could grow into this company, and I enjoy the creative aura i receive at this office"

Not

"My whole life I've been told that I will be an inevitable failure, I've been constantly reminded of what I can't do."

That just makes me tug at my collar and swallow.

I might've gone too far o nthe INTJ thing, which was pretty well written, but take it easy on the self-bashing.

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advice: I wouldn't take advice from someone who's willing to give so much of it without asking simple questions like that first.

"Wow he sure spends a lot of time talking about his weaknesses, m̶a̶y̶b̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶'̶s̶ ̶p̶a̶r̶t̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶e̶s̶s̶a̶y̶ ̶r̶e̶q̶u̶i̶r̶e̶m̶e̶n̶t̶s̶ nigga get rid of all of it what the fuck are you doing"


Yeah, I goofed a little, but I'm trying to help him, and it seems like there's just a lot of self-bashing in there.

Honestly, disregard if you want, but I really didn't like the line about being told you were a failure. You don't give yourself enough credit, and it's concerning to see you do that in real life. Puff your chest out some more, dude.


EDIT: Fuck it was an essay, I thought this was an application.
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May 18, 2015 8:22 PM #1363344
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please remove the myers briggs thing. It's very concerning when people open up too much too suddenly, because as a reader I think that you expect me to memorize this, and that I'll prefer you know and whatever. Na man, give them what they want, and package everything you write like an advertisement, with some of your creativity on the side. Don't tell them your weaknesses unless:
A- you can make it seem like a strength
b- they explicitly ask you.

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I made some of the changes you recommended, but you didn't understand the point of the paper at all. The personal stuff is going to stay in as well as the weaknesses, because my professor wants me to talk about it.

Thanks for the input.

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Honestly, disregard if you want, but I really didn't like the line about being told you were a failure. You don't give yourself enough credit, and it's concerning to see you do that in real life. Puff your chest out some more, dude.


EDIT: Fuck it was an essay, I thought this was an application.

Yeah but that sort of stuff is actually going to be the topic of paper 4

Paper 4- Diversity and its effect on you
Describe in 1-2 pages in what way(s) you have been treated differently because of your physical or non-physical characteristics, and how you have been effected by such treatment
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May 18, 2015 8:33 PM #1363347
If this is a paper, then yeah man.

I was under the impression this was an application for a program in-school, and it made me concerned that you were shitting on yourself.

If anything, just please don't write so critically about yourself in a professional application.

I submitted this essay for a schlarshop from my battalion, and out of the other several hundred that applied, I got it.
I am XXXXXX Cook, and I am a XXXXXXXX at the University of XXXXXXX for XXXXXXXX. My civilian goals are to work in high-technology manufacturing, possibly for the military. My military goals, however, are to be the most dynamic, flexible Marine I can, and excel in any role or billet asked of me. I have always tried to learn from every experience that I’ve had, and I’m no stranger to asking my peers, and other Marines, for advice and input. I believe it is my tenacity for self-improvement and excellence that sets me aside from my peers.


For your paper, do you, man. You've got it. But for applications, state the weakness in a way that you acknowledge it, but also in a way that proves that you're in control of the weakness, you're doing something to combat it, and that the way you work around the weakness actually makes you a better worker.

Like, when I applied for the Veteran's Affairs office, I told them one of my weaknesses was remembering due dates, so I told them that I put sticky notes on everything, and always carry a notebook to write deadlines into, and I check it all the time. Thus, not only am I combating my memory issues, I actually end up being more productive because I have a constant reminder.

I start working there in August.

Don't sell yourself short, homie, because there's so many people that already do that. Like, set the bar for yourself slightly higher than you can reach, and when you get the job, you'll find out that when you have to reach for the bar, eventually you'll be able to stretch to it, so that for your next job you set the bar even higher, and you end up reaching for that too.



btw Nish I'm taking you up on that. I won't flame until next monday.
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May 18, 2015 8:40 PM #1363350
It's cool man, yeah I know not to talk about my weaknesses on applications.
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May 18, 2015 8:42 PM #1363351
I <3 you jussuhon
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May 18, 2015 10:35 PM #1363367
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Check what I got made. :D
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May 18, 2015 10:36 PM #1363368
But why
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May 18, 2015 10:37 PM #1363370
Because I could. It was a free event held t me campus for the first 200 students that showed up.
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May 18, 2015 10:38 PM #1363372
Why'd you go with scorpio instead of kite
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May 18, 2015 10:39 PM #1363373
That must have taken an hour give or take?
Very Nice!
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May 18, 2015 10:44 PM #1363375
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Why'd you go with scorpio instead of kite


Because I plan to use it (when I can make a better photo) in several places, and the only real consistency I've had lately is the word Azure in screen names. I used Scorpio because I am in fact a Scorpio, so it can be used around without it being too specified for a singular location.

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That must have taken an hour give or take?
Very Nice!


Funny thing about that. I waited in line for an hour, but the actual process took about 10 minutes. They printed out the lettering, and using some kind of pasting technique, got them onto the pre-made sign. It was interesting, because it was a fast but effective technique, which is why the limit was 200 students, and not 20.
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May 18, 2015 11:22 PM #1363386
What even is that? A street sign?
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May 18, 2015 11:22 PM #1363389
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What even is that? A street sign?


Indeed it is. A smaller one, but a street sign nonetheless.
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May 19, 2015 12:54 AM #1363410
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"Wow he sure spends a lot of time talking about his weaknesses, m̶a̶y̶b̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶'̶s̶ ̶p̶a̶r̶t̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶e̶s̶s̶a̶y̶ ̶r̶e̶q̶u̶i̶r̶e̶m̶e̶n̶t̶s̶ nigga get rid of all of it what the fuck are you doing"


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