Classification: Cyborg

Weapons: Energy sword/ plamsa pulse cannon on right arm

Appearance: A stickman with a slightly darkened turquoise colour. He has what looks like a buster from the megaman series, also coloured in dark turquoise.

Abilities: Moves faster than the average human [approximately as fast as Usain Bolt. ;)] Can turn his cannon into a sword at will. Can also turn his elbow into a jet thruster to empower his attacks

Weaknesses:

Anyone who has more experience as a swordsman can overpower him.

Due to the experiment failing, 0.5 doesn't work normally. There are several errors that the computer system detected:

-If he fights to quickly, he feels pain in the eyes and heart. This is similar to the Spartan in kill the spartan or Umbrella in Umbrella: Hypersonic

-If he's critically injured, he finds it hard to breathe or has severe pain in the spine

He has a strange fondness to the weak or innocent and even helps them if necessary :confused:

Personality: A lone wolf who helps those who seem weak or injured

Back story:

Umbrella's creators. A simple problem had been haunting their minds; "So hold on, if we kill Umbrella, who'll replace him?"
"He's right y'know. Without our best fighter, God'll damn us in hell!"
"Then we have no choice, we'll have to make one ourselves."
"But how?! You're insane commander! Last time we tried that our creation subtracted our forces by 47%!!"
"Then we'll try again."
"And if we don't?"
"We're Fucked"
And thus, they created project 0.5. It took many days, but it was a success.
"Welcome to the world 0.5. You're our newest soldier. Our oldest unit; Umbrella, will be terminated. We've designed you to replace him. You have a long hitlist.
The first words that came out of 0.5's mouth were much to the commander's horror.
"You've failed this time. Make another plan in hell."
"Wait wha-ARGH!!!"
Blood splattered all over his face, "First blood," he whispered.

"Security alert! Breakout in sector 30!!" and as soon as 0.5 heard that, billions upon billions of soldiers were in front of and behind him. "FREEZE!!!" one of them said, pointing his gun at 0.5. But 0.5 didn't even flinch. "Your move," he said.
"3...2...1...FIRE!!!"
"G'bye asshole."
He jumped of the aircraft and landed in the centre of the park, much to the surprise of many. "Now, where do we start?" he said with a grin.

Demo:

0.5 enters the room. He spots a computer and walks towards it. The computer says 'Please enter or say the amount of enemies you want to fight'. 0.5 makes his choice quickly, "5 waves of 10 people please."
"Are you sure?"
"It's quite obvious, but yes."
"Very well. Prepare yourself."
"I'm already prepared."
"Enemies incoming in 5...4...3...2...1...Enemies have entered the arena."
0.5 didn't even listen to the computer. He knew the enemies had come before the computer said so.
"GET HIM!!!"
The black figures charged at him, yet, 0.5 didn't show any sign of fear. He just smiled. Then, as the first black figure was just 1 metre away from him, he shot him. The black figure's face splattered into pieces as more and more clones entered the room.
"I don't care how many variations of you are here. You're all fucked"
He then slashes and shoots 4 of them, killing them with ease. He runs away from a few, then charge-shots and obliterates 26 of the figures. He then jumps into the air and shoots the remaining troops until only one was left standing. He seemed more powerful then the others. "Target detected. Reaction; Fuck you asshole."
0.5 tries shooting him, but somehow, every shot is deflected. "Damn it" He tries to slice him up with his sword, but it's useless and 0.5 finds himself thrown across the room. "I'm done playing this stupid game" he says, charging up a full power shot from his cannon. The stronger clone, now identified as a robot, runs across and proceeds to body slam 0.5; It was a bad move. The robot, now with a big hole through his chest, lies lifeless on the ground. The computer is impressed.
"Well done. You are now qualified for wRHG battles."
0.5 smiles, says, "Thanks," and leaves the room.

Available: YES!! :D

Points: 0/0/0

I'm at work so this is pretty much going to be bullet pointed, but you need a personally and description. Discounting 1 intentional exception to the rule, there really aren't stick figures in wRHG, so most writers might not acknowledge him as one and would need something to go off of. I'll see what I can do about CnC on the demo when I get home.

And welcome to the Lounge!

Nice, it seems like you know what are you doing and i like your work, bbut try to talk about his personality and apearance with more details, and about when he killed his own creators, tell us if he is evil or it was just a failure on his programation.
By the way your job is good but i advice you to re-read it several times this days and everytime you have something new, add it, and try to be a little more specific and detailed on your story or demo, for example:

''He then slashes and shoots the majority of them until only one is left. He seemed more powerful then the others. "Target detected. Reaction; Fuck you asshole."

You can talk a little more of that kind of situation, and for example rather than writing slashed his foe, you can write he charges his cannon and shoot attempting to blast his opponent, who falls defeated on the floor.


So, without that, what you have done seems to be good, and if you want any day we can fight with ours wRHG's, ;-) (Sorry, now i'm busy on my first fight)

Well welcome deary~and a rather interesting gladiator, but to me it's sort of vague and needs a little more work~

For example your appearance section. Many of us here need a full-body description of your character, so the color 'dark turquoise' doesn't really give any sort of image. Is it even talking about his appearance? I mean, it doesn't have to be overly descriptive just put things like maybe the style and color of their hair, their eyes and such. Look at other profiles here if you need an idea what I'm talking about~

Also I'm sorry but the weaknesses are not enough, at least to me. And also his powers/weapons don't really explain much. I don't know, I just feel like they're all jumbled up and they don't fit where they should be.

Like:

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Excessive use of his right arm.

Feels more like something to note than an ability. If anything it just says that your character is right-handed, or that he likes to use his plasma cannon often.

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Anyone who has more experience as a swordsman can overpower him. This is a pretty rare occasion, since him swordfighting skills are off the charts

This rather hard to say. I mean it doesn't imply that he's not OP (overpowered), but close ranged combatants around here are a bit of a disadvantage. Which isn't really a bad thing but the statement that his 'skills are off the charts' bother me.

But maybe you could balance that with another aspect of his character, like since he was made only a few days maybe he has a huge flaw that causes him to glitch out from time to time. Maybe moving too much puts a lot of stress on his body so he tries avoid using his full abilities. I don't know, it's your call really~

Also you're missing an important section to your profile. You didn't put in a personality section. That is extremely important since it helps other writers here get an idea on how he acts and such~

Other than that, it has a lot of potential; just take your time and read over it. Make sure you included all the sections that's needed for your profile (which can be seen in the WRHG Character Rules thread here) and look at other gladiators to see what other people did and improve on what I pointed out~

Good luck deary~
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Well welcome deary~and a rather interesting gladiator, but to me it's sort of vague and needs a little more work~

For example your appearance section. Many of us here need a full-body description of your character, so the color 'dark turquoise' doesn't really give any sort of image. Is it even talking about his appearance? I mean, it doesn't have to be overly descriptive just put things like maybe the style and color of their hair, their eyes and such. Look at other profiles here if you need an idea what I'm talking about~

Also I'm sorry but the weaknesses are not enough, at least to me. And also his powers/weapons don't really explain much. I don't know, I just feel like they're all jumbled up and they don't fit where they should be.

Like:

Feels more like something to note than an ability. If anything it just says that your character is right-handed, or that he likes to use his plasma cannon often.


This rather hard to say. I mean it doesn't imply that he's not OP (overpowered), but close ranged combatants around here are a bit of a disadvantage. Which isn't really a bad thing but the statement that his 'skills are off the charts' bother me.

But maybe you could balance that with another aspect of his character, like since he was made only a few days maybe he has a huge flaw that causes him to glitch out from time to time. Maybe moving too much puts a lot of stress on his body so he tries avoid using his full abilities. I don't know, it's your call really~

Also you're missing an important section to your profile. You didn't put in a personality section. That is extremely important since it helps other writers here get an idea on how he acts and such~

Other than that, it has a lot of potential; just take your time and read over it. Make sure you included all the sections that's needed for your profile (which can be seen in the WRHG Character Rules thread here) and look at other gladiators to see what other people did and improve on what I pointed out~

Good luck deary~
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You've actually given me some good inspiration! I'll edit soon