late night works

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Oct 3, 2014 3:52 AM #1249122
http://www.filz.us/view/446c9ed0-86e/

so i couldnt sleep and this was the result. Tbh im slightly disapointed with the length, but oh well. Also besides fluidity i didnt really focus on things like realism or smoothness or force ect so those might be a bit off at some points, my mistake anyways enjoy and i would like to hear some criticism if possible.
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Oct 3, 2014 5:43 AM #1249168
well this is a nice animation.... although the trails look like jelly... but since you said that you didnt focus very well then...its ok... i like the fight choreography tho!
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Oct 4, 2014 5:54 PM #1249747
Definitely needs some double framing. wayyyyy to fast
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Oct 10, 2014 10:19 PM #1252728
Needs force on some attacks, but nice overall.
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Oct 13, 2014 4:24 PM #1254438
something you can fix incredibly easy is to make all the trails last only 1 frame. Only use 2 or more frames for trails if its like, hes doing a really big attack that covers a bunch of area, like him swinging something in a circle or something. otherwise 1 frame will make the trails look alot better. The gravity was also really weird, and so was the flow.