My first animation Please give tips: D

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Oct 18, 2014 10:23 PM #1257294
Hi guys I am pani. And I clarify before my English is bad :S.
These are my first two animations just try to do my best thinking movements as they should be. Really the two are almost the same only in a I put an obstacle or an attempt thereof ^^.
Please give me advice and if you need the .fla file to see it better let me know. :D

1º:

http://www.filz.us/files/099d420c/2e4/run.gif

2º:

http://www.filz.us/files/4d7f6bd2/6b1/run2.gif

From already thank you very much. Bye :3
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Oct 18, 2014 10:57 PM #1257299
The first one looks good! But the second one looks kinda weird. When the stick first jumps on the box he suddenly stops, and it seems to be a bit shaky near the vaulting part too. Just keep at it, those are AWESOME if they're your first animations, my first were so choppy they looked like a badly made stop motion xD
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Oct 18, 2014 11:16 PM #1257307
For your first animations ever they're not too bad I suppose
just try to keep in mind actual human movement when you're animating
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Oct 18, 2014 11:23 PM #1257310
Quote from Mugetsu
The first one looks good! But the second one looks kinda weird. When the stick first jumps on the box he suddenly stops, and it seems to be a bit shaky near the vaulting part too. Just keep at it, those are AWESOME if they're your first animations, my first were so choppy they looked like a badly made stop motion xD

My idea was to do as they clutched the box to take Inpulse. Here is the 2nd animation without staying still.
http://www.filz.us/files/e4c8a367/ac8/run2.gif
Thanks for the tips!.

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For your first animations ever they're not too bad I suppose
just try to keep in mind actual human movement when you're animating


Thanks for your tips!!
It's what I try to do the actual movements but with practice I guess I'll go better. About what it's my first animation is really only about 2 years ago in anime flash at school who had it as stuff but do not really remember any of it xD. By the way cute gift! Who is it?
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Oct 18, 2014 11:59 PM #1257331
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Thanks for your tips!!
It's what I try to do the actual movements but with practice I guess I'll go better. About what it's my first animation is really only about 2 years ago in anime flash at school who had it as stuff but do not really remember any of it xD. By the way cute gift! Who is it?

the gif in my sig changes so I don't really know which one you're talking about
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Oct 19, 2014 12:18 AM #1257336
If I realized ^^ to reload the page. No problem !, greetings