wRHG: Mr. Alderday

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Nov 9, 2014 9:55 AM #1266777
Name:
Jean C. Alderday


Age:
55


Abilities:
-Mr. Alderday is able to lift heavy objects and can take a lot of hits.

-Sports four fully functional arms.

-He also carries a side weapon and may even be accompanied by guards depending on the situation.

Side Weapon: (Only one weapon per fight) (Click to Show)



Weakness
-Mr. Alderday grows impatient quickly which messes with his ability to make rational judgments in crucial moments. Having his actions stumped one after the other tend to set him off the quickest.

-Mr. Alderday may be physically fit, but having two extra arms causes medical problems in his body, mainly his back. He is able to do rigorous activities without any complications, but hard hits on his back will send him in great pain and may bring him down on his knees.

-Mr. Alderday is big, it's hard to miss him with a projectile when standing still.

-When accompanied by guards, his defense is lowered and is less alert to his surrounding.


Appearance

-Mr. Alderday is 6.6ft. tall and 350 ibs.

-Mr. Alderday is very muscular and has four arms.

-Mr. Alderday wears a different variety of suits ranging from standard black and white, to more modern tones.

-Mr. Alderday has a noticeably large, chiseled, cleft chin.

-Mr. Alderday usually sports a watch on his normally unconcealed left arm, he usually switches his watches around like he does his clothes.

Personality:
Mr. Alderday is professional and respectful; he likes to converse with his opponent before a fight and a lot of the time he likes to offer them drinks and compliments as if they are discussing business, but when the fight is initiated however, he doesn't play around. Mr. Alderday may be a composed fighter, but he latches onto the inadequacies that he felt when he was a young lad growing up. He can lash out aggressively when the opponent degrades him during a match by out preforming him. In public, Mr. Alderday conceals his extra arms under his clothes. He is not afraid to show them when it's appropriate, but he would rather keep a low profile. Mr. Alderday respects others despite of difference in class, but in return, he expects them to respect him as well. As far as his moral compass goes, he'd be neutral. He would do the right thing if he wouldn't need to go out of his way to do it, but he isn't below stretching his morals to further benefit his goals.


Tactics:
If Mr. Alderday has guards by his side, he will most likely tell them to engage if he is taken by a surprise ambush by the opponent. Mr. Alderday may call in for support like an attack helicopter or extra troops if the enemy starts to over-whelm him. Mr. Alderday is fairly strong mind you, strong enough to rip concrete slabs out of the ground if he uses all four of his arms. He will use his environment to his advantage if he can to either protect himself, set up obstacles, make pathways for himself and others, and use them to damage his opponent. Mr. Alderday has very unique arm movements when attacking; He will use one arm for jabs and standard punches, but will use both of his right or left arms for heavy punches. Mr. Alderday can use all four of his arms to crush his opponent against his body or choke a larger opponent out. He doesn't uses his legs in combat all that much, they are usually reserved for running, stomping, kneeing, and drop-kicking. Mr. Alderday is very sturdy and can take a lot of hits, because of this, he will sometimes let faster opponents get a hit in on purpose so he can get them close enough to damage them. On top of all of that, Mr. Alderday can be creative and resourceful when given the opportunity.

Setting/Circumstances

-Normal match/Surprise encounter:

Mr. Alderday will not restrict himself in anyway during these kind of matches when it comes to his resources.

-Sport/Honor match:

Mr. Alderday will not use any external influences like guards or call in for any support. He will fight on his own and will only use a weapon if the opponent plans on using a weapon as well.

Story (Click to Show)



Demonstration (Click to Show)



Win(s): 0 Lose(s): 1 Draw(s): 0 Forfeit(s): 0


Appointments: (Waiting list)
Chamel
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Past Battles:
vs. Malacal (Omega)
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?89552-wRHG-Battle-Mr-Alderday-vs-Omega

Availability: No.
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Nov 9, 2014 1:09 PM #1266821
Pre-demo spelling stuff (Click to Show)


Demo spelling stuff (Click to Show)


I really like this character, and his story was pretty damn good. Lots of stuff you could use and expand on in later stories, eh? I also like the guy's name, it sounds like an actual name. Good stuff all around, but I have two nitpicks:

I feel like the Personality section could be seperated into two sections, Personality and Tactics/strategy/something along those lines.

Also it says in the story that
the serum that was injected into him had increased his life expectancy to 130 years,
but how could they figure that out? I think it should say that the serum had potentially greatly increased his lifespan. It's best to stay vague with these kind of unpredictable things.


This is all I could see right now, but hopefully this all helps. Good luck!
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Nov 9, 2014 1:41 PM #1266828
Oh wow, this is a pretty interesting fellow~! I'd love to see more of him deary~

Also he seems to be missing a points section and demo, so I can't really allow him to fight anyone yet. But by your availability I don't think you were planning to any time soon anyway~

But really, he seems pretty good. A good feeling of possibilities with this guy and his uniqueness~

Welcome to the Lounge~
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Nov 9, 2014 5:15 PM #1266856
Thank you all for the kind replies. It was 2am when I finished the profile, so I wasn't as keen as I normally am when writing. I'll get to work on it right now.
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Nov 9, 2014 6:43 PM #1266873
I imagine he orders a lot of custom-made clothing... must be a pain in the ass to make a four-armed tuxedo.
I like it. This character takes simple ideas and makes them quite unique and spectacular. The story was well thought-out too. If there is one complaint I have it's the personality section seems to be more tactics than personality. I'd really like to know more about the personality of this individual.

Also, I'd love to battle you when you're available.
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Nov 9, 2014 9:18 PM #1266914
Oh yeah, I just fixed up this page and added some extra stuff, I also got the demo done so you can check it out if you want.

But yeah, College is top priority for me right now. I'll put you on my waiting list so I can remember your offer.
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Nov 9, 2014 11:57 PM #1266954
Yo, he seems pretty cool! Waffles took care of the CnCing, so why not go ahead and add me to that waiting list of yours? ;-D

Or, in a more polite way of saying it; I'd like to challenge you whenever you are available.

(Chance would absolutely love to admire some of Mr. Alderday's suits.)
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Nov 10, 2014 12:25 AM #1266957
Quote from Chamel
Yo, he seems pretty cool! Waffles took care of the CnCing, so why not go ahead and add me to that waiting list of yours? ;-D

Or, in a more polite way of saying it; I'd like to challenge you whenever you are available.

(Chance would absolutely love to admire some of Mr. Alderday's suits.)


Sure dude, I'm down with that. Added.
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Nov 10, 2014 12:29 AM #1266958
Ooh ooh, add me, add me. Tall arms guy against even taller more-arms guy.
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Nov 10, 2014 12:41 AM #1266961
You character sounds interesting enough. Sure! I could add you to the ever growing list.