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Nov 23, 2014 5:14 PM #1272964
Xanxus:
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Demo:
http://sta.sh/078d9eznems

Demo unfinished including Fulmen:
http://sta.sh/0vzp4vvgw2f


Weapons:
weapon
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Abilities:
Xanxus utilises his super speed, fire spewing gauntlets and inability to feel pain or fear. His second form is 'chemical surge'. when his heart rate rises to drastic levels some of the dormant chemicals injected into him by government chemists become active and he slips into an abnormal state which increases his speed, overall strength and gives him a sixth sense which allows him to foresee any attacks or human action... he also turns grey (as seen in the unfinished demo including Fulmen).

Story:
Joseph Meller had finally gotten his life together; he had a wife with a kid on the way, a stable well paying job and general happiness. However one day, Joseph made a small mistake at work which lead to him being fired. As a result of this he could not support his family; his wife left him and went to live with her family. Joseph’s life went downhill, he became homeless and poor. A couple of months later Joseph was approached by a group of men in suits and taken to a government bunker. Joseph was strapped down and injected with various chemicals whilst a video stream of his former wife being raped and killed played on for the one reason that the chemicals injected would cause him to feed on his own emotions; his rage, his anguish, his devastation. All of josephs facial features were wiped and morphed into one single plane of skin. He was robotised and trained as an assassin. He was nicknamed ‘Xanxus’ because he was the 10th Assassin in the 10th training unit (X=10). Xanxus Joined RHG because he was alerted to an electric elemental named Fulmen who had become a lot stronger than him and was targeting him due to Xanxus being assigned Fulmens personal friend as a target; Xanxus had to train against others to become stronger.

Weaknesses:
Xanxus’s only weakness is anything that reminds him of his old life. He goes into a state of intense rage in which he destroys anything around him and attacks without thought thus he is easily countered but his strength does increase in this state so one hit would leave an opponent devastated. He is also useless against Water, Air and Earth elementals.

Associations:
Government of his country (The Democratic Association of Nomads); Ally, Fulmen: Enemy; Any other Assassin (even from his own unit/ country): Enemy (they will compromise his mission’s validity/ steal his target)



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Nov 23, 2014 5:20 PM #1272966
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Good luck fighting!
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Dec 1, 2014 7:07 PM #1276364
thank you I will try my best :D
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Dec 2, 2014 10:14 PM #1276913
You need to practice your movements and fighting a lot.
You got sexy fire btw.

Nice story, too. Can you give a little information on his past-life family for a better story because I would like that. You don't have to though.
Good luck with your RHG.

EDIT: Have you watched Katekyo Hitman Reborn? This RHG reminds me a bit of it.
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Dec 2, 2014 10:36 PM #1276924
To add to what Calixer said, nice fire gradients, but try to observe your movements and keep them as natural as possible. when fighting, no one moves like that, except the super speed part. Try to practice adding more force to attacks as well as proper buildups for punches and kicks and practice reactions too.(I'm talking about the way the grey stick handled being hit lol)

I'm sure you'll improve in due time :)
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Dec 3, 2014 1:52 AM #1277013
i agree with both of them. your punches dont really look like they are landing nor do they have any force behind them. you practice that and i dont see why you wont be a pro
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Dec 3, 2014 10:54 PM #1277432
thanks you guys I think ill increase the frame rate just so i have time and space to make the movements more precise
also calixer i have and my rhg's abilities are based...kiiinda heavily on tsuna also i used xanxus' name because it opened space for customization if you know what i mean.
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Dec 13, 2014 12:07 AM #1281567
Update: added weapons
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