S.A
Started by: SadFaicNo | Replies: 4 | Views: 706
SadFaicNoPosts: 5
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Age: 199
Story
She was made during an explosion during a raid, and she also got flung into the water as soon as it happened. Because of that she has no parents, so she was taught by tutors She lived in the water, only to get up to fight and do other business. Eventually she went to the StickPage arena to fight. She has traits as friendly and brave against enemies
Abilities
Sword + Water
Tsunami
Water tornado
Weakness
Fire
Human weaknesses except water and drowning
Demo
Avaliable
0/0/0
Capn SquidyPosts: 30
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View Profile You might want to add more to your RHG profile. I know that you are hitting the requirements, but maybe you should elaborate on her abilities and maybe make your demo longer so you can clarify on what exactly she can do. What can she do with water? Can she breathe in it? Can she manipulate it? Does being soaked in water enhance her swordplay or makes her hit harder with her weapon? How skilled is she with a sword?
Those kinds of details will be beneficial for whoever wants to challenge you. Having more details will make people more interested in your character and will convince them to initiate a challenge.
Phantom Ace2Posts: 3,650
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View Profile I agree with Squidy. Add more details for your RHG's abilities & weaknesses because it would be a really hard time for you and your opponent to animate your RHG.
SettoBannedPosts: 2,394
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View Profile Basically same thing. More details? Maybe a longer story? Don't be afraid to make your RHG strong, because your RHG only has 2 power and 1 weakness. Basically everything on this page could use a bit more detail.
Phaxtolgia2Posts: 716
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View Profile IDK if it's just me, but neither the demo, nor the image is working for me.