It all started with a young teen, volunteering at a local iron mill as a night guard, but for some strange reason... his desk was put in front of the molten iron pool. In one night his life has changed, Crome was napping and then, he heard foot steps. It was Dr.Coalsin, you see doc Coalsin was a mad scientist, he lived in a shack off the borders of the iron mill, but the doctor had a ray gun in his hand and shoot Crome and the beam hit him back and he fell into the molten iron. The wound made a opening so the molten iron went inside him, but the energy kept Crome's body intact but the wound healed and the iron cooled and made a internal iron shell and he some how absorbed all the molten iron and made a flame in his body that heats up the regenerating iron inside him.

powers: make his internal metal shell external, he can use the regenerating iron in him with the flame, it can make a ball of molten iron to spit at other wrhg fighters ( a.k.a hot shot) the last power is that he can absorb and metal weapon parts and use them.

weaknesses: his shell will brake by 2 hits in arms and legs , 6 in body, 1 in head and ballz, he can't hold hi hot shot for ever if he can't get a aimed shot his shell melt but it will regen after 30 seconds also he is slow in metal mode and can't stand heat over 1000 Fahrenheit.

personality: loves having fun, happy, popular, adrenaline junkie, and likes texting all the time before fighting.

Looks:navy blue with black eyes(normal form) gray with fire blue eyes.

Wins 0 loses 0 quits 0 b.f.(battles finished) 0

I like the concept, but you really need to flesh him out more.

Is there any way you can expand on his personality?
You also need an appearance section, a section for your score, a proper Demo, just make sure you read through the rules/guidelines before you continue.

That's all I can really say at this point, without going into the writing mechanics of his "backstory"...

Um... I see this is unfinished, but really, you shouldn't go posting incomplete characters. At least characters this incomplete. These are the rules you have to follow in setting up a wRHG. Give it a look over, and try editing your page to follow them.

Also, you should look into going into better detail explaining your powers and weaknesses, and use proper sentence structure. As is, I'm getting a general idea of what you mean, but overall it's kind of a clusterfuck to try figuring out.

the demo will be posted in a other thread

I was talking with grom over skype (since ik him irl) And he's struggling in work a bit and he had to go to tai kwan doe. (or however you spell it XD) and he didn't know how to save.

dude the demo will be in other thread and im not good at making stories and shit

There's no rush. Just keep in mind that you will not be allowed to battle other gladiators until you have met the requirements.
And don't worry about coming up with stories, that just kind of comes with time and experience.

On another note, it would be preferred if your demo was placed in this thread in the original post, contained within a spoiler.

p.s i dont have a animating program right now sooo yea

Oh, this isn't the place for animating.
This is the "Writer's Lounge" for a reason, haha.
Your demo should be written.

Nice name by the way.

If you don't know how to save, PM it to yourself where you're at or set up a google docs. I'm honestly getting sick of seeing incompletes, I mean it'd be like

What I find most interesting is that nobody seems to acknowledge the Auto-Save feature the forum does to posts every... 30 seconds or so?