bernasmp vs iam Irvin

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Dec 23, 2014 1:55 AM #1285640
Ok guys! So...

Links if you want to know more about the abilities:
Fennec,The Fox(bernasmp) vs Yuuki Zero(iam Irvin)

bernasmp: http://sta.sh/0zwc9gtrpri
iam Irvin: http://sta.sh/025q0p1rijc2

1st battle for both of us

Vote fairly ;)
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Dec 23, 2014 2:31 AM #1285658
BTW both links lead to fennec had to look up Yuuki ._.
Anyways, I have to vote for Yuuki. I liked the effects, And the fighting was a bit better In his animation than yours.
I also liked the dialogue in your part, But I just liked Iam Irvin's more. His was a bit higher quality. BTW Donuts.
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Dec 23, 2014 2:47 AM #1285670
Quote from Setto
BTW both links lead to fennec had to look up Yuuki ._.
Anyways, I have to vote for Yuuki. I liked the effects, And the fighting was a bit better In his animation than yours.
I also liked the dialogue in your part, But I just liked Iam Irvin's more. His was a bit higher quality. BTW Donuts.


Sorry about that, messed up the links, fixed it ;)
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Dec 23, 2014 6:02 AM #1285737
bernasmp, you are pretty good... but, still... some fail happend, but i can't describe what
irvin, 0.0 you improving pretty fast. but, some scene was serioslly same with some animation, example, the oxob vs blazer scene, some people can notice that really easy,(because that scene was cool), trying to make your original move.
im voting irvin
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Dec 23, 2014 6:36 AM #1285747
ℓøℓ yeah..sorry bout the oxob part
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Dec 23, 2014 7:38 AM #1285765
My vote goes to bernasmp. I really like his style of animate. Also nice song choice :p. I also chose a song by Rise Against for my first RHG battle. It should be posted on here pretty soon!
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Dec 23, 2014 11:22 AM #1285803
I can tell that both of you put about the same effort in making this... But here's some CnC :


Bernasmp :

You did your best. Really nice angles, a bit slower than you'd normally expect at some parts, but still good. The ear thing and the intro made me put some hopes up for you. The Sync was also really well made. Unexpectably well actually. The battle seems to have been easy for you because all you do is make your character dissappear and slash trough your enemy, and that looks good so you're gonna get a few votes up just because of that. Also, the story is kinda better. The background is pretty easily done, so I can tell you didn't put much effort in it.

The main problem with your animating, are the bad poses and stick constructions. The legs, for example, seem to be bending really weird, and there is no preparations for a jump, for example. Instead, he just flies off the ground, levitating or something. It's wobbly. It's very wobbly. You can work on that, but I'm sure you'll handle it eventually.

iam Irvin :

Very well. Totally unexpected. I can see who your animating rolemodels are very easily by your style of animating and that's what you should be shooting for. The combos are super smooth and fluid. I don't know how hard it was for you to make something like this, or would it be harder to make a story, but that's not at all what RHG battles have to be about. There is no angles, almost no text whatsoever, and that's gonna loose you some votes, but generaly I think you deserve a victory here.

Also, cut down on that damn V-cam, it ruins the animation.

My vote goes to you.

Hope I helped.
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Dec 23, 2014 11:36 AM #1285804
I'll try making a dialogue and angles..and yeah I'll remove the V-cam
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Dec 23, 2014 11:53 AM #1285805
Bernasmp: I liked the style of animating - it felt really fluid. The rushed ending was very awkward though.

Irvin: Your animation was good, but it felt more like combo practice than an actual battle. Also, try to scale your v-cam properly or else it stretches your animation and messes it up.

I voted for the fox on this one.
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Dec 23, 2014 1:13 PM #1285816
Lol I didn't really notice cuz silly me watched it without sound for some apparent reason ._.
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Dec 24, 2014 6:34 AM #1286076
Yall know that I'm 15 right?so there's a lot of time for me to improve
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Dec 24, 2014 9:13 AM #1286128
@bernasmp what's the song name in your part ?
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Dec 24, 2014 7:34 PM #1286289
Bernasmp i liked your close-ups, and Irvin i liked your style of animation. I actually had a hard time deciding the winner, but in the end my vote went to irvin.
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Dec 24, 2014 10:03 PM #1286327
Both were mediocre to average.
Irvin - Better animation, animated the characters more realistically, but made the fox look like a bunny, also too short, hardly any build up toward a decent climax.
Bern - very 1 dimensional animation. Wide angle covering all the action mostly. Also, the movement wasn't that realistic. Kudos to you for attempting to create character development with the gladiators, but it was quickly contradicted by the fox basically throwing a knife into yuki zero's eyes, blinding him lol. (it was funny though)

My vote goes Bern because story adds entertainment value. Because these animations are still relatively on a similar level, story takes precedence over skill here.
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Dec 24, 2014 10:21 PM #1286333
Quote from Captainalien72
Both were mediocre to average.
Irvin - Better animation, animated the characters more realistically, but made the fox look like a bunny, also too short, hardly any build up toward a decent climax.
Bern - very 1 dimensional animation. Wide angle covering all the action mostly. Also, the movement wasn't that realistic. Kudos to you for attempting to create character development with the gladiators, but it was quickly contradicted by the fox basically throwing a knife into yuki zero's eyes, blinding him lol. (it was funny though)

My vote goes Bern because story adds entertainment value. Because these animations are still relatively on a similar level, story takes precedence over skill here.


I think no one really got the final... His character goal is to kill the ones who killed his family, and he says that in the animation, so my character quoted a Gandi phrase, which says "an eye for an eye will only make the whole world blind", that says that basically that revenge isnt the answer, and so, he only deserves to die because he's killing everyone, innocent people, because of his problems.. I know I didnt really expose that idea very well but that was my idea of a good ending with that character idk ahaha