Hi, as you know i'm new to flash and i decided to make this Oh yea and i drew pedo.

You need to work on keeping the guy the same size the whole time.

that's not bad at all man. you're doing good for just getting flash, that's better than my first animations.

i think you should ad some more backstory, i don't really connect with the characters. like i can see where they're coming from, as an observer, but i don't really FEEL their predicament, i can't relate, you understand? it's really good as such though, everything flows nicely and it's definitely not boring. keep it up, just develop your characters a little more. as john quincy adams once said, the characters are the heart of a novel that pumps the blood which is it's plot or story through the body, which is the novel itself. i paraphrased.

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i think you should ad some more backstory, i don't really connect with the characters. like i can see where they're coming from, as an observer, but i don't really FEEL their predicament, i can't relate, you understand? it's really good as such though, everything flows nicely and it's definitely not boring. keep it up, just develop your characters a little more. as john quincy adams once said, the characters are the heart of a novel that pumps the blood which is it's plot or story through the body, which is the novel itself. i paraphrased.

I don't think I've seen a C&C post that made me laugh like that before.

If you're working with flash, export your movie as a flash movie. Not a gif.

Thanks for the positive comments and i have a lot to work on. But the fact that the blood disapears sorry about that. (I hate pedobear!!!)