Xaio's recent art

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Feb 10, 2015 9:05 PM #1307102
I've been drawing quite a lot recently, I've only been posting on DeviantArt so there's more stuff over there.
http://xaioshadow.deviantart.com/
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please leave some C+C :D
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Feb 11, 2015 12:09 AM #1307171
Ayy
theses aren't too shabby Xaio, is that first one from a reference though cus it looks a lot better than the other two, although it could just be that you got a bit lazy with the other two.
that being said, your lines work and shading could use some cleaning up, even in the first draeing where everything is the smoothest the linework and shading are noticably sketchy in places and that really throws the rest of it off.
I'd also like to say that in the second picture the flow of the dress seems a tad bit awkward in the way its supposed to be like, being blown up by wind or whatever
and finally man, there's no possible way to throw cards up that they'd fall like that and his legs don't really look like they have as much depth as they're supposed to have
good stuff though keep it up
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Feb 11, 2015 8:49 AM #1307325
Hey Drone :)
Yeah the first one was drawn from a picture I found on the Internet.
Dresses are still pretty awkward for me to draw.
The cards in the third one weren't supposed to look realistic it's like.. Magic or something I guess.
About the sketchy lines. I guess that's just how I draw, I could probably make it cleaner if I tried but most of the time I'm too lazy :3
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Feb 14, 2015 5:54 PM #1308777
just finished a new drawing
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i tried to keep the line work and shading as smooth as possible.
what do you think?
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Feb 20, 2015 7:02 PM #1312606
for your new one. first off looks great. well done but the shading and line art are still sketchy but better. his shoulder looks a bit off. could be the folds in the clothing. and the case for the sword looks a little lazy.