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… Everyone with the "is this pivot" no it isn't its flash DX I cry

That's because it doesn't qualify to be flash....no offense

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That's because it doesn't qualify to be flash....no offense

….. all the offense taken dude.

also I'm trying out for secondary

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If kyzu can't get in ill try out for the secondary shop or whatever

Tryout:

Its not like i wanted to tryout … B-b-baka! (Click to Show)

um.. i dont think so. in the first picture, the pose of the dead blue stickman is awkward. in the second one, the teeth are outside his mouth -.- and the third..its so simple that theres no way you could make a mistake lest you mismatch the eyes or deform the stickman. no from me. any thoughts guys?
Also, Terrorarc is right. he just saying these arent very high quality. these are also kinda low quality for pivot(having seen, stryx, vbxp, and my works). talk the criticism with an open mind. Terror is just trying to show your weak spots so you can work on them. he isn't out to get you or trying to demean you.

I did make these a while ago. give me an idea and ill see if I've improved….

I'm trying out for secondary

Hey ZephAxix! i'm interested on joining on the pic & sig shop!

My recent works:

Shuriken Fanart

Gift for Chaos Hedgust

I guess i'm active... i don't post that much ,but, i'm almost always there reading threads here and in the dojo.

I don't know what you mean by experience lol

+my weak points are backgrounds >.<

Uh, Zeph, in case you didn't get my message I want to leave the shop and offer my primary position to the next available schmuck.

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Hey ZephAxix! i'm interested on joining on the pic & sig shop!

My recent works:

Shuriken Fanart

Gift for Chaos Hedgust

I guess i'm active... i don't post that much ,but, i'm almost always there reading threads here and in the dojo.

I don't know what you mean by experience lol

+my weak points are backgrounds >.<

these are actually really nice. ill add u later

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Uh, Zeph, in case you didn't get my message I want to leave the shop and offer my primary position to the next available schmuck.

k. sorry to see u leave :(

I'm confused
I knew terr aru and soul made it which makes it 11 members
What bout me

Guess who just adapted a new drawing style for a tryout….this guy



Any better?

This is still a tryout for secondary :/

Holy fuvk so much tryouters, isn't there no more spaces?!

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Holy fuvk so much tryouters, isn't there no more spaces?!

Aaaapparetly there is one more spot in the secondary shop senpai eepman

Also what do you think of the drawing I made for the tryout?

I need someone to critique my artwork D:

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If kyzu can't get in ill try out for the secondary shop or whatever

Tryout:

Its not like i wanted to tryout … B-b-baka! (Click to Show)

Well first, you need work on your effects.
Your poses are fine and simple
You need to put more "coolness" to your pictures as well (im sorry i can't describe the word im finding for that well) and by coolness i mean filters, glow, gradients and all that.

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Well first, you need work on your effects.
Your poses are fine and simple
You need to put more "coolness" to your pictures as well (im sorry i can't describe the word im finding for that well) and by coolness i mean filters, glow, gradients and all that.

Also critique my new one that I did ... Cause I made those a while back so I wanted to see if I've improved

Also I use the flash animation software to draw all these because I don't have space on my computer (it sucks) and I just don't know how it works XD

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Guess who just adapted a new drawing style for a tryout….this guy

Tryout (Click to Show)

Old:

New:

Shading for scarf inspired by SoulGazer … didn't know how i was gonna shade it lol

Any better?

This is still a tryout for secondary :/

You certainly improved a bit, although you still of course, need some work.
First, i don't like how you outlined the whole scarf like that and how the scarf folds, you can actually try to search a scarf and see how it's done
The eye is alright, but it's kind of weird.
Give me your skype man, i wanna see how you do art.