hi yes hello what?

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Feb 18, 2015 12:42 AM #1310697
AHEM

http://i.imgur.com/Hc4lSdD.gif -playing with movements
http://i.imgur.com/QXbCIIE.gif -unfinished Pivot war with Caleb
http://i.imgur.com/CtsWBkL.gif -Sound grenade test

I keep posting but I get no feedback while the rest gets all of it. Ain't the world so fascinating?
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Feb 18, 2015 5:08 AM #1310800
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AHEM

http://i.imgur.com/Hc4lSdD.gif -playing with movements
http://i.imgur.com/QXbCIIE.gif -unfinished Pivot war with Caleb
http://i.imgur.com/CtsWBkL.gif -Sound grenade test

I keep posting but I get no feedback while the rest gets all of it. Ain't the world so fascinating?


ikr? im confused. Your an awesome animator. Those movements clean, and fine... can you tell me how you animatite :D
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Feb 18, 2015 4:38 PM #1311099
That's only cuz u sux scrub
Nahhh jk :3
Nice animations dude, I really like the stick war thing one lol
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Feb 18, 2015 5:00 PM #1311124
woah pretty cool :D
i liked the first one with the movement !
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Feb 18, 2015 5:59 PM #1311149
Ay son, you in SP now? Noice one. Let's wreck scrubs.
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Feb 18, 2015 7:10 PM #1311192
I can always join your clan if you have one(with a different RHG of course. Just to please you) and then we can really wreck scrubs ;v

Say, may anyone give me a legit cc? I haven't requested nor received one in ages. Especially from Stickpagians.
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Feb 19, 2015 4:59 AM #1311499
The problem is that the majority of the people here are not close enough to your level of animation skill to actually give you good CnC.
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Feb 19, 2015 5:49 AM #1311517
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I can always join your clan if you have one(with a different RHG of course. Just to please you) and then we can really wreck scrubs ;vSay, may anyone give me a legit cc? I haven't requested nor received one in ages. Especially from Stickpagians.

Very well then.

1st animation:
1.) In the very beginning, the run is actually OK from here but when he picks up speed, his back should bend forward instead of retaining the same position. The reason? Air resistance.

2.) Again, with the run, his whole body should at least be bobbing up and down, even if it's just a few millimeters.

3.) When he started to go fast, his legs are really too close with each other that I'm surprised he hasn't tripped on them yet. Make them stride longer but the difference is that they move faster.



2nd animation:
1.) Slow Combat. Yes, it's smooth but it's slow and boring. The transition of the 1st overview scene to the 2nd close up scene was too fast. You can clearly see that the guy is still anticipating his punch but on the next scene, he has already released it.

2.) Jittery/Shaky joints. Especially the part when he raises his arm(Caleb) on his stance.

3.) On Caleb's Intro, when his arms transition to point at you, the forearm joint is way too thin. I get the perspective part but the problem here is the thickness of said arm. It's way too thin and it looks like it's not facing the camera at all.

4.) Again, on the end, Caleb's head is way too huge, even though he's bending forward.



3rd animation:
1.) Not enough force is shown when the guy threw the "Sound Grenade"(Unless it was lubricated but I highly doubt it). It goes way too far for a throw that weak.

2.) Check the left guys arms(The 2 guys with the weapons standing). It's stiff when he kneels down.

3.) The right guys arms when his ears(I'm assuming since this is a "Sound Grenade". Although, it is possible that his nose will too) were bleeding. I can't clearly make out what he's doing with his other arm. I know he's holding his ear but I see the other arm just dangling.



Personal Note:
Most of these are just me nitpicking. You're already good. Try something else other than movements since you already have a solid foundation of this. Good job.