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May 28, 2015 1:06 PM #1366755
Google docs get weird. Emails are inconvenient for writing. I think that Waffle's point on individual stories will be fun. Instead of thinking about your character and your opponents, you could think of ways to bring together 2 duos and write about 4! The possibilities! Teamwork! wRHG will never be the same!

But yeah, this is a great idea and I'd be happy to join in on the fun.

Also, Urako in Dozer's weaknesses it says that "6# If you have a good or neutral aligned character, he will not only spare you, but he will make sure you survive the fight."
That's the same thing. I'm sure you meant something else, but it might become a problem.
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May 28, 2015 2:33 PM #1366786
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Google docs get weird. Emails are inconvenient for writing. I think that Waffle's point on individual stories will be fun. Instead of thinking about your character and your opponents, you could think of ways to bring together 2 duos and write about 4! The possibilities! Teamwork! wRHG will never be the same!

But yeah, this is a great idea and I'd be happy to join in on the fun.

Also, Urako in Dozer's weaknesses it says that "6# If you have a good or neutral aligned character, he will not only spare you, but he will make sure you survive the fight."
That's the same thing. I'm sure you meant something else, but it might become a problem.


It means he has to not only not kill you, but he has to make sure you don't die from anything else. In the second fight, Dozer went so far as to save Rogue from falling debris. This is a good example.
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May 28, 2015 2:39 PM #1366788
Oh. I see now. Still might want to clarify that the second part is something like "even after the fight"
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May 28, 2015 2:43 PM #1366789
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There would be several ways to tackle a 2v2.


Each side could have a joint thing going on where both people agree on a story and one writes a paragraph, sends it to the other to write another, sends it back and carries on until it ends.

Another idea would be to boot up Google Docs and have the better writer of the two to write the doc. as both people talk in the docs chat.

Or each person could write individual stories and instead of ranking individual stories you have to rate two at once. Like if one side had a 6/10 story and a 5/10 story and the other side had a 1/10 story and a 9/10 story, it'd add up to 11/20 and 10/20 and the first side would win.


I'm sure other ways could be done. But if one were to happen I'd love to read in on it, and possibly participate. If you're wanting to do one of those Urako, I'll support you!


Personally, i like the version where everyone makes their own battle the best. Collabs can be too difficult. And by the way, if i ever did this, it would be a while.

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Oh. I see now. Still might want to clarify that the second part is something like "even after the fight"


I tried to clarify a little.
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Jul 12, 2015 5:01 AM #1381918
Well, sense you and Waffle pretty much fixed my entire wRHG for me, I have to thank you for that. Also, I really like your character, seems like he'd be a great one to tussle with one day, throw me on the hitlist :D
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Jul 12, 2015 12:55 PM #1382020
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Well, sense you and Waffle pretty much fixed my entire wRHG for me, I have to thank you for that. Also, I really like your character, seems like he'd be a great one to tussle with one day, throw me on the hitlist :D


Do tell me, what exactly did Urako do to fix up your character? You messing me up with him or smth?
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Jul 12, 2015 12:57 PM #1382021
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Well, sense you and Waffle pretty much fixed my entire wRHG for me, I have to thank you for that. Also, I really like your character, seems like he'd be a great one to tussle with one day, throw me on the hitlist :D


Vern is right. However, i'll still put you on the hitlist.
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Jul 12, 2015 6:28 PM #1382108
Not the character specifically, but my character page was pretty messed up. Waffles and Urako helped me fix it, make it shorter, and pretty much add exposition I guess.
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Jul 12, 2015 6:39 PM #1382111
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Not the character specifically, but my character page was pretty messed up. Waffles and Urako helped me fix it, make it shorter, and pretty much add exposition I guess.


I'm pretty sure you have mixed up with Vern because he commented and gave constructive critique more than i did.
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Jul 12, 2015 6:59 PM #1382114
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I'm pretty sure you have mixed up with Vern because he commented and gave constructive critique more than i did.


Frankly, I doubt you even gave ANY at all. (Which is ofcourse, not a problem)

Maybe the kill was particularly unsatisfying so he wants a redo.


The age doesn't really matter to me. My character is 18 and he's only trained for two years. One of the guys he fought is 14. (Although Dozer has been in 3 fights and a demo.)


That's all Urako said in your thread, Pup
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Jul 16, 2015 4:02 PM #1383665
I know you've got a lot of people in your hitlist, but if you wouldn't mind adding Marcus the Runist, I'd appreciate it.
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Jul 16, 2015 6:18 PM #1383722
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I know you've got a lot of people in your hitlist, but if you wouldn't mind adding Marcus the Runist, I'd appreciate it.


Added. I actually have two people out of my league, two people that are busy, and one that lost interest.
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Jul 16, 2015 6:25 PM #1383725
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Added. I actually have two people out of my league, two people that are busy, and one that lost interest.


Hold up, I can understand if you think Waffles is out of your league but who else? ^^

Speaking of which, I read what you did concerning Gamma there, interesting thingie there, if I say so myself. Now, I can't help but wonder how you've succeeded to be such a popular wRHG'er already, or is that just me? ;)

@Aric Kale : Who exactly is Marcus the Runist, some new wRHG I missed out on or? New faces always catch my interest and I'd hate to miss one :)
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Jul 16, 2015 6:31 PM #1383728
Thanks Urako, though it's *Aric, not Eric. Sorry for nitpicking.

@Vern: Marcus is my "welp, Thatcher is severely underpowered and I didn't put enough time into making him so I might as well try again" wRHG.
However, I'm waiting on Mods to delete the Thatcher thread and approve the Marcus thread.

I'd love to see your thoughts whenever it comes out. I know there are some improvements to be made, but I can't fix them until the thread is posted.
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Jul 16, 2015 6:56 PM #1383736
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Hold up, I can understand if you think Waffles is out of your league but who else? ^^

Speaking of which, I read what you did concerning Gamma there, interesting thingie there, if I say so myself. Now, I can't help but wonder how you've succeeded to be such a popular wRHG'er already, or is that just me? ;)

@Aric Kale : Who exactly is Marcus the Runist, some new wRHG I missed out on or? New faces always catch my interest and I'd hate to miss one :)


Aric is experiencing bugs right now, so he PMed me for help. (I don't know why he chose me.) Anyways, he wanted me to review his character early. You'd be able to see it if it weren't for the glitch and i'd be willing to bet you'd approve of it's balance as well. The guy is very knew to writing actual stories so go easy on him, but he is off to a good start.

As for my popularity, i really don't know. Some people talk about my character being interesting so that might be it. I'm not surprised, I had that character idea for years, so I had plenty of time to refine it.
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