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Feb 21, 2015 10:45 AM #1313090


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Alias: Jak and JIL
Name: Jack Reed
Age: 53


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Abilities

- Mental
Jak is an absolute genius, with both technical intelligence and quick thinking. Artificial neurological upgrades allow him to have better reactions than he would on his own, but still not as great as a trained warrior.

- Physical
Jak wields a high-tech jo staff of carbon fiber (referred to as JIL). The staff has the capability of mechanically transforming into many weapons and tools, within reason. This versatility means that he has all kinds of tricks up his sleeve.


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Weaknesses:
- Jak is certainly in no way a warrior, and is completely out of shape. He is neither fast, nor strong, and even though his genius is always able to work out a plan, he is often unable to physically carry it out.
- Jak’s staff is very much a prototype, making it both unreliable and susceptible to being broken or jammed.


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Story:
Jack was, at the highest point of his life, awarded conservative energy researcher and engineer, trying to find a more efficient source of energy to power the world. And though it took him 32 years, he finally found it in the form of controlled thermonuclear fusion. Convinced that he had made a discovery that could change everything, Jack took his results to the rest of the scientific community, where, much to his dismay, the new source of energy was rejected and banned due to its unstable and dangerous properties. The fame and fortune that Jack had been working to achieve for decades was suddenly ripped from his hands, leaving him with an illegal result and a reputation ruined by the greed of trying to monetize it. But, he decided as he picked up the one fusion prototype that had been saved from confiscation, there would be another way to achieve those things. Using the prototype as an energy source, he designed and constructed an experimental staff that he hoped would lead to his victory on the battle field. Jak left his life of safety in the field of research and design to fight his way to glory and wealth in RHG.


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Mechanics of JIL:
JIL is a state of the art weapon, which uses nanotechnology to achieve the kind of versatility that it has. To transform itself, the nanobots rearrange themselves into the intended shape. This means that there are severe limitations on the size it can reach, and that larger formations may be more fragile due to the spread out materials.


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Demo:
Newest (demonstrates level of animation skill)
Old (demonstrates ability)


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Battles: None
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Availability: No
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Feb 21, 2015 10:53 AM #1313091
resize your RHG image to 150x150
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Feb 21, 2015 10:56 AM #1313092
Sorry about that.
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Feb 21, 2015 11:14 AM #1313096
There you go . alot from that i like your rHG :)
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Feb 21, 2015 11:20 AM #1313101
Thanks! I've been meaning to make this for a while now.
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Feb 21, 2015 11:22 AM #1313103
Sounds like Tony Stark+ my wRHG's MF Staff. Also, maybe he can upgrade the material for his jo staff to make it stronger such as high carbon steel. Still, great job man! Your writing isn't choppy and it's easy to read. The story is interesting. But he seems to have more weakness than abilities tho (it also didn't say that he's good with a jo staff or in jojutsu). Besides that... EVERYTHING IS AWESOME!!! I like the newest Demo very much! It's creative and funny! Hope I can see more of them pretty animations in the future! ^-^

One question. What software are you using?
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Feb 21, 2015 1:33 PM #1313118
Nice RHG!
I like how it seems to have some originality.
Keep up the good work!
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Feb 21, 2015 1:37 PM #1313119
Thanks guys. You are also right that it was inspired in part by Tony Stark.
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Feb 21, 2015 1:46 PM #1313122
Cool RHG we can battle some time since you use pivot!������
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Feb 21, 2015 2:00 PM #1313124
Maybe you're a fan of Ironman.
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Feb 21, 2015 2:18 PM #1313126
@TheLegendA We could if you really want, but I'm not sure it would be entirely fair.

@Chai Mathew I'm not really a fan of superhero comics or anything like that, but I do like Iron Man a bit.
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Feb 21, 2015 2:29 PM #1313138
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@TheLegendA We could if you really want, but I'm not sure it would be entirely fair.


Well that was quite mean.
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Feb 21, 2015 2:30 PM #1313140
We should fight sometime man put me on a hitlist :3
And I like your RHG! It seems a bit original
But if your Rhg tried to run from mine
That's pretty much suicide
@Stickboy wow...
One of the most inactive people here just ninja'do me...
But it is kinda true though, root is much more skilleder than Legend >_>
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Feb 21, 2015 2:40 PM #1313147
The Bo looks like a Nailfile lol
But nice demo man, and nice RHG too.
Good luck with Jak broot lmao
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Feb 21, 2015 3:31 PM #1313171
nice1

Why not Jack as a name tho

also just make your staff a grey stick because you can't do 3D with sprites in pivot
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