SU Fanart: Opal

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Feb 22, 2015 7:53 PM #1314044
Her simple yet beautiful form was a perfect design to work on. Also, because she's beautiful. Did I mention she's beautiful?

http://maroonfa.deviantart.com/art/Su-Fanart-Opal-515813508?ga_submit_new=10%253A1424634486
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Feb 22, 2015 8:07 PM #1314047
I like it, though I feel the bottom left arm is a bit short, her butt is a bit low (it's on her leg, lol), and it's just personal preference, but it seems like her forehead is just tooooo huge.
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Feb 22, 2015 8:21 PM #1314051
I thought it said oppai and got excited
it's really damn messy man, both the coloring and the linework, maybe try and fix that up a bit before you finish in the future.
also your colors are kinda bland, try not to saturate for no good reason
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Feb 22, 2015 8:45 PM #1314064
Quote from Azure Kite
I like it, though I feel the bottom left arm is a bit short, her butt is a bit low (it's on her leg, lol), and it's just personal preference, but it seems like her forehead is just tooooo huge.

Thankyou. Was going for a foreshorteningon on the hand. That's what I was going for

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I thought it said oppai and got excited
it's really damn messy man, both the coloring and the linework, maybe try and fix that up a bit before you finish in the future.
also your colors are kinda bland, try not to saturate for no good reason

drone, I know you're a great artist and all and Ima let you finish, but this stone-cold betty got some of the best oppai this side of the galaxy.

regarding cleanse, that'll be a problem I'll have to resolve by hitting my head on a wall a bunch of times.