Gone
Started by: Spyrix | Replies: 1 | Views: 443
Feb 26, 2015 5:58 PM #1316432
It all started in 2030 humanity was at the edge of extinction. World war 3 broke out, it was an all out nuclear war. millions died everyday while babies failed to be born. 2 years later humanity had fallen, the only living beings were the Rhg characters they had the powers and skills to survive the war. They knew they had to re-populate. This continued to for 50 years while maintaining the battles and thats when I was born. Chapter 1: I never enjoyed sleeping in my room even if I have powers well actually not yet i'm still trying to develop it, that's why i'm afraid of the dark. It's not the dark i'm afraid of i'm afraid of the things in the dark. It all started in grade 3 everyone was talking about myths about the dark ones. The dark ones were Rhg characters with dark or demonic powers that re-populated a long time ago in 2032 they say that the dark ones crawl into a children's bedroom and take them and force them into well lets just say raising the army if you know what I mean. People always called me a coward or powerless loser I hated it that's how I never liked sleeping in my room. One day my parents said thay wanted me to try sleeping in my room because my dad setup my room perfectly and he didn't want the setup to be useless. So on that night I lied down on my bed watched both sides of my bed so no one gets in the room, this continued to 12:00 am and then it happened. to be continued
Feb 28, 2015 3:46 AM #1317447
Keep on writing, mang. It's the best way to get your skills up. One thing that will help you a lot though, try looking up some short stories. Read some stuff you're interested in; maybe fanfiction, maybe stuff written by Isaac Asimov, whatever you like. When you do this though, don't just read the stories, but take a look at how they're structured. They use paragraphs, for one, and after a while you'll notice that they all flow a certain way when moving from one event to the next.
Don't just read these stories for enjoyment, but analyze them and learn what they do, and then apply this to your own writing. Keep on practicing :>
Don't just read these stories for enjoyment, but analyze them and learn what they do, and then apply this to your own writing. Keep on practicing :>