.: Zack :. - [BATTLING xRAGEx]

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Feb 27, 2015 3:24 PM #1317083
Zack


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Color: #990000


Abilities

Control/Create fire
Summon his sword
Can't be killed by fire, heat, ...


Weakness

Human weakness (except fire... of course lol)


Weapon: Sword

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Can turn into a Demon and fight for Zack
The Demon is really strong and quite fast
Demon's color: #FF0000
Demon's weakness: Water.


About

His family were killed since he was a child. He always want to revenge. ( I'm worst story teller D: ).


Demo

First Demo


Clan

EXECUTIONER - Leader


Availability

No, battling xRAGEx


Battle

None


Hitlist

Ipman
EclairCat


Point

0/0/0


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Feb 27, 2015 3:37 PM #1317088
dat face lol :D

I love it!
the fire effect are great!
your story was 2 sad 4 me (DONT FUCKINGGG CRYYY ;_____; )
put me in yur Hitlist :< we gonna have some fun later!
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Feb 27, 2015 3:38 PM #1317091
Quote from EclairCat
dat face lol :D

I love it!
the fire effect are great!
your story was 2 sad 4 me (DONT FUCKINGGG CRYYY ;_____; )
put me in yur Hitlist :< we gonna have some fun later!


THANKS M8 !!! lol
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Feb 27, 2015 3:41 PM #1317095
Haha fire is a human weakness haha I can pick up your guy and smash his skull into the ground and kill him in two seconds haha.

Please, replace the generally assumed-to-already-be-there human weakness and put actual weaknesses in there. You have a guy who is able to control fire as a primary weakness and summon some sorta sword thing as a secondary. I like those powers, I do. I like how you added the power of him being unhurt by fire, it's a thing many people forget about these sort of things. I like that you paid attention to that. So, here's a good weakness. Water.

Fire could be something that feels cool to him. That he can wash himself with, that he can drink. WATER could be the thing that burns him, that sears skin off his flesh. The colder, the worse.

Also, I'm going to assume the demon thing isn't actually counted since it isn't in the powers list. If it WAS in the powers list I'd hate this guy like, a hundred times more lol.
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Feb 27, 2015 3:46 PM #1317097
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Haha fire is a human weakness haha I can pick up your guy and smash his skull into the ground and kill him in two seconds haha.

Please, replace the generally assumed-to-already-be-there human weakness and put actual weaknesses in there. You have a guy who is able to control fire as a primary weakness and summon some sorta sword thing as a secondary. I like those powers, I do. I like how you added the power of him being unhurt by fire, it's a thing many people forget about these sort of things. I like that you paid attention to that. So, here's a good weakness. Water.

Fire could be something that feels cool to him. That he can wash himself with, that he can drink. WATER could be the thing that burns him, that sears skin off his flesh. The colder, the worse.

Also, I'm going to assume the demon thing isn't actually counted since it isn't in the powers list. If it WAS in the powers list I'd hate this guy like, a hundred times more lol.


thanks ! fixed XD
i like water weekness but nah, he is a human and he needs water to live lol
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Feb 27, 2015 3:48 PM #1317099
Quote from maivanhuyhoang2000
thanks ! fixed XD
i like water weekness but nah, he is a human and he needs water to live lol
Perhaps then you could make it into "water-element attacks"? Well, sure he can tolerate water but in combat situations a skilled water mage/bender would perforate him/

Your animation is nice, I'll give you that.
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Feb 27, 2015 3:49 PM #1317100
Quote from maivanhuyhoang2000
thanks ! fixed XD
i like water weekness but nah, he is a human and he needs water to live lol


The only character I know of in the past few months that ISN'T a human is mine.

I say, replace the body's water needs with fire, and have water replace fire as a harmful thing.

Also, I just realised that it's the sword that turns into a demon. God damnit.


Honestly, human weakness is not a weakness list-viable weakness. It is weakness filler. Read my words, understand them. Human Weakness is not something you put in there. It is something true for every human character. And I'll know when a character isn't human. Because it'll SAY. You literally have nothing of any worth in your weakness list. It is an empty list.
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Feb 27, 2015 3:49 PM #1317101
Pretty rhg ya got mvhh.
I liek it :3.
Love the demo and dat face btw
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Feb 27, 2015 3:55 PM #1317104
Quote from WafflesMgee
The only character I know of in the past few months that ISN'T a human is mine.

I say, replace the body's water needs with fire, and have water replace fire as a harmful thing.

Also, I just realised that it's the sword that turns into a demon. God damnit.


Honestly, human weakness is not a weakness list-viable weakness. It is weakness filler. Read my words, understand them. Human Weakness is not something you put in there. It is something true for every human character. And I'll know when a character isn't human. Because it'll SAY. You literally have nothing of any worth in your weakness list. It is an empty list.


hmm... how about the demon can be hurt by water... sounds gud to me :P
but i'll keep the human weakness sry lol

Quote from GuardianTempest
Perhaps then you could make it into "water-element attacks"? Well, sure he can tolerate water but in combat situations a skilled water mage/bender would perforate him/

Your animation is nice, I'll give you that.


thanks !

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Pretty rhg ya got mvhh.
I liek it :3.
Love the demo and dat face btw


lol, thanks m8 !!!
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Feb 27, 2015 6:30 PM #1317167
loving the demo, it was very smooth in my eyes! i hope to see a battle from you soon
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Feb 28, 2015 12:39 AM #1317298
Add me to the hitlist bro!
it seems like all that practices on hyunsdojo is working out : D
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Feb 28, 2015 12:45 AM #1317302
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loving the demo, it was very smooth in my eyes! i hope to see a battle from you soon

thnx ! :>

@Ipman : oh... Ill add u, thanks !!!!
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Feb 28, 2015 2:08 AM #1317371
:V you should post da sword download here. if not send it to me in pm or skype. ah need dat sword an you know whai
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Feb 28, 2015 3:01 AM #1317415
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:V you should post da sword download here. if not send it to me in pm or skype. ah need dat sword an you know whai


k, ill send it when i use my lap xd
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Feb 28, 2015 3:13 AM #1317420
wow already battling Rage ._.