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I'm just trying out some stuffs. CNC?

completely hypothetically, how skilled would you be at drawing them in a rainy environment, or any environment in which there's liquid on their face?

Preferably clumpy liquid, and it would be great if she was disgusted or scared

I think I said too much

no but for reals work on proportions. I can't tell if you used a diagram to make sure everything is evenly spaced, and I'm willing to say you didn't. It's very good detailing, just make sure the spacing between the eyes is right and shit

Alright, so the problem that I'm noticing here is that your facial proportions are kinda all over the place. Like, the one on the left makes the most sense out of the three, but the other two seem sorta wonky, as if there is some kind of break in the skull structure in the head, especially the far right one. Another thing also pertaining to your facial proportions is that you're not wrapping facial features around the face like they should be, but instead, you're just drawing them onto the side of the head as if it were a flat plane.
also, the middle girl has a dislocated right shoulder.
Don't mean to sound harsh Corn, I'm just tryna tell it like it is, and you know I love you bro, keep it up, you'll get it <3

that's a really good point, make sure your shit wraps around their faces or it looks weird

And im not just talking about cellophane

I looked for a few moments, because something seemed off, and I believe it's the lack of a bridge to their nose that was throwing me off. Also, the eyes look about the same size. The left and middle girl are both in 3/4 profile views, so a bit of foreshortening is required to properly show off the eyes. The girl on the right, her eyes just look a bit crooked, dunno how exactly to explain it.

Onto the shapes of their faces, I'd say they're pretty nice, no real complaints. They do seem a bit... er, big, and I'd say it's because their faces are a bit... small. What I mean by this is that it seems that their faces don't take up the proper amount of space on their head. It may just be a part of your style, though.

And I just gotta say it, but this is some of the cleanest, most beautiful lineart I've seen. Seriously, complete and total props bro.

ahyeah dude, no chicken scratch around these parts, I was going to mention that in my post but I forgot

Thanks guys! I appreciate harsh but constructive comments btw. They're way better than generic comments. I'll keep working on drawing better! It's been quite awhile since I've drawn. Love you all <3

We love you too! Stay amazing! We should totally have an art trade some time.