Practice: Combo with no reactions

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Mar 22, 2015 7:39 PM #1331310
I made this...CnC pliz

http://thebestg07.deviantart.com/art/Something-521895722?ga_submit_new=10%253A1427052860

not good...
but, I tried.
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Mar 23, 2015 6:15 AM #1332022
- First punch needs spacing for more force
- The sweep kick looked weird because it happened too fast, or it wasn't eased.
- Was that a double punch? or did he just switch hands twice?
- The flip needs gravity and he didn't have enough momentum to do it, which made it odd.

Everything else was nice after, keep improving man
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Mar 23, 2015 7:43 PM #1332622
Quote from Ipman
- First punch needs spacing for more force
- The sweep kick looked weird because it happened too fast, or it wasn't eased.
- Was that a double punch? or did he just switch hands twice?
- The flip needs gravity and he didn't have enough momentum to do it, which made it odd.

Everything else was nice after, keep improving man


Thanks ipman!

I know it was wierd. :p lol

thx, I will try :D
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Mar 24, 2015 12:02 PM #1333436
I find it a bit.... stiff? I dont really know... Plus, maybe you could add a double frame before or after a hit depending on what it is.
In my opinion, harder hits should have a double frame before and smaller ones, like jabs, should have a double frame afterwards..... My opinion though.
Also, after the first kick, the arm movement looks weird.....

Though it is nice overall
Keep going!
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Mar 24, 2015 8:11 PM #1333720
You mean anticipaion and easing right?
yeah, I knew I could more of that

thanks for the feedback!