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Vern Shorts : Law & Order

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Mar 23, 2015 10:40 PM #1332863
Hey y'all. So I wrote this quickie for an English assignment (The teacher actually demanded to read some of my works, though I really didn't have anything that wasn't high-fiction back then). I decided to combine the obligatory with the practical and went out of my comfort zone to write this one in first person (as opposed to the third person perspective I'm more comfortable with).

While CnC is ALWAYS appreciated (No sugarcoating required, though try to be nice ;3), it's really not that necessary for this one. As it isn't my habit to write non-fiction or write from a first person perspective, and as this work is to a certain degree quite rushed, I don't really regard this as a work of quality thus there may be some sloppy mistakes here and there. I just decided to share this one with ya folks for fun (some fruit for those who like to read ^^).

So without further ado, here's the story. Enjoy!

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(The work's one page in google docs so it is in all its right a shortie ;) )

EDIT : So apparently there's this show called Law and Order with this theme song that I wasn't aware of. Please note that that's just a stupid coïncidence cx.
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Mar 24, 2015 12:02 AM #1332914
This inspired me to write a short (I'll put it up on SP soon).
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Mar 26, 2015 8:54 AM #1335111
Wow! First first-person POV writing! Very impressive indeed! Better than mine...
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Mar 26, 2015 8:57 AM #1335113
Quote from Matthew Murphy
! Better than mine...


Don't sell yourself short, Matt.

I recall saying that very same thing back when I was a noob writer then I got told off by another writer. Just keep practicing, everyone has their style and you'll develop yours.

Everything comes in due time.
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Mar 26, 2015 10:37 AM #1335175
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Don't sell yourself short, Matt.*

I recall saying that very same thing back when I was a noob writer then I got told off by another writer. Just keep practicing, everyone has their style and you'll develop yours.*

Everything comes in due time.


Not sure 'bout that- I'm multi-styled.
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