Tried remaking the combo from the criticism of other people.

Don't know whether I'd improve or naw. (Low self-esteem D:)
You guys decide.

(Pivot doesn't accept Transparent sprites. rip effects)

pretty smooth! Also i think you could add more power to the punch. Strong punches recover quickly, which makes the punch even more power.
You could also improve on your footplacement.

The jump is awkward looking, but other than that it's not bad. I don't understand what Legend means by foot placement being off.

Yeah, the jump could use work, but otherwise great! The foot placement looks perfect to me :L

looked properly, it looked good, SORRY LOL