The animation revival challenge (hyun's dojo)

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Apr 2, 2015 2:32 PM #1340461
This challenge was meant to take one of your old animations and re-animate it but better and here was my entry

Old: Image

New: Image

This challenge was meant to show people how much you've improved. CnC is encouraged
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Apr 2, 2015 6:14 PM #1340565
Wow that is a large improvement, Kudos to you :)
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Apr 2, 2015 7:14 PM #1340588
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Wow that is a large improvement, Kudos to you :)


Aha thanks :D
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Apr 2, 2015 7:19 PM #1340593
Both are pretty stiff and need more flow, you need to work on smoothing out your movements.
But as for improvement, your making good progress! Always watch other animators and try to improve :D
Good luck m8
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Apr 2, 2015 7:45 PM #1340608
Quote from Setto
Both are pretty stiff and need more flow, you need to work on smoothing out your movements.
But as for improvement, your making good progress! Always watch other animators and try to improve :D
Good luck m8
Alright thanks for the advice :)
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Apr 2, 2015 7:48 PM #1340609
You need a floor. The first animation has better foot placement than the second purely because the legs don't move much. There's no flow, no concept of weight, no physics, nothing. Is this like, a week before and after?

I guess I oughta make something for this challenge.
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Apr 2, 2015 8:45 PM #1340628
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You need a floor. The first animation has better foot placement than the second purely because the legs don't move much. There's no flow, no concept of weight, no physics, nothing. Is this like, a week before and after?

I guess I oughta make something for this challenge.
I made the first animation 2months ago? The second I made in probaly under 30 minutes? it was a short combo.