It's my first time to make a comic so... It's a little sloppy ._.
Part 2 will be better.
I'd like to know what you think about this so CnC (i dont know wat CnC means lol)

Comics:
PART 1: http://sta.sh/0d93oeqypa7

This are pretty cool . I like that it's based of your RHG's original story line .GJ;)

I feel like you could've added more to it, instead of showing the father just kill one dude..

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I feel like you could've added more to it, instead of showing the father just kill one dude..

Im almost finished with part 2. There's more killing in it. Also the art's better.

great more killing. cant get enough of that killing. killing > character development

I think this belongs in the stick fanart thread?
I'll leave it here cus the nemesis comic thing kinda belongs in the stick fanart thread too but it's not in there and I don't think it would be worth it to move it there

I think stick fan art are just oneshots and this comic isnt a oneshot but a series

That's true. Looking forward to more killing in the future then :rolleyes:

This is going to have only two parts cause... You know, my RHG's story is kinda short :P

Its short because killing > character development

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This is going to have only two parts cause... You know, my RHG's story is kinda short :P

Well, you could take the opportunity of expanding it, giving more detail on missed information.

You could improve your comic by adding a bit more detail and maybe a background for appeal? (i guess according to you or the style you're going for). For example, i honestly didn't know what was happening in the scene or part where your rhg "powered up" (referring to the eyes). keep working