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Milo Kotara (And Seele, too)

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May 15, 2015 4:52 PM #1362131
Given Name: Milo Kotara

True Name: Kadish

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Personality: Lack of empathy. Generally seeks Seele’s approval. As fights wear down on his mood, his sense of clarity drops considerably.

Appearance: 5’7”, Caucasian. Green eyes.
Black, scraggly hair to his ears.
Green overcoat with a simple, geometric silver trimming.
Black pants.
White undershirt with green stripes.

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May 17, 2015 6:59 PM #1362894
I've always liked reading your works! I'm glad to see that you've come back to the fray!

Two questions, mostly out of curiosity however.

You say that he's a soul eater, and that he gains the abilities of the people whose souls he eats. One of them grants him the ability to set ablaze. I recall your last wRHG having a similar power to that. Is there an implication there?

The other one is with a similar path of the lying, specifically in writing. What constitutes that? Like, my mother took my dad's last name when they were married so she signs things Linda Kubacki. Would he see Schmidt? On a similar vein, would he see things that are intentionally left out, and if so, would he know what they were, or only that they were?

I look forward to seeing you fight again!
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May 17, 2015 9:02 PM #1362919
1) Yep. Got back into the habit of killing off the previous gladiator to make room for the new one. Additionally, Gin's ability to move through reflective surfaces has become Milo's ability to move through anything that could be called a portal.

2) Half-baked philosophy time! Names are arbitrary. In programming, we can assign whatever name we want to an object, but that name is only ever a reference to the object, it isn't the object itself. Rest of the actual answer in the edit.

2b) He doesn't even know a lie was given, he just sees the truth. In the case of half-truths, he sees through to the whole as well. The general insanity helps, since to him it's not at all odd that there are words flowing off the page, sign, etc. itself because there's more happening than is being written. Whether Milo takes the time out to read the entirety of the information being presented to him or not is a different matter. If he finds himself with half truths, it's almost certainly because he skimmed the information looking for a key thing or another. If the mood takes him, though, he can pore obsessively over a thing and come out of it knowing everything. Then the issue is that all that true knowledge gets sloshed around with everything else in his head.

EDIT: Changing my mind on 2). In the spirit of knowing too much, Milo would see the incomprehensible (not literally...but...you don't wanna piece it together.) true name, every iteration of her name (including names that had been considered before her birth), and nicknames. Titles are included, past and present.
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May 17, 2015 9:08 PM #1362923
I love everything save for the absorbing power thing. I've always disliked this. It goes against my, what's been called, "toolbox conundrum." Allow me to explain:

The Toolbox Conundrum (Click to Show)


This is a part of a rant I plan on finishing and posting in future. What you're doing is stealing others' tools, even if they're just small ones. Even if you slap on downsides to each individual one, you're gonna end up with a messy toolbox.

And if we leave that part out, your character is perf. I absolutely adore the gun, that's a good primary ability. And the blood & sight powers are good secondaries. Love this guy totally. Except the soul eating. It'd be more fitting to say soul eating lets you see their past memories, thoughts, whatever, since souls are about the character of a person, not their powers or tools.
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May 17, 2015 9:33 PM #1362932
WafflesMgee, I think you're right. Soul-Eater was added mostly to retain the self-immolation ability, an artifact from Milo's first draft that didn't mesh well thematically. Or have a particularly valid reason for existing until soul-eating (and with it the return to killing prior gladiator), for that matter.

Though since I'm borrowing heavily from Changeling: The Lost, I'm still keeping Doors to Everywhere.
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May 17, 2015 9:35 PM #1362933
Doors to Everywhere sounds like an impressive power, something that shouldn't be tucked away in that spoiler so neatly as to infer it is a lesser power. Being able to jump from one dimension to another from doors and windows could suit as a primary power.
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Aug 25, 2015 12:52 AM #1398938
Currently in a battle with Tantalum.
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