The events here happened when Guts was still strong, before the Lotus wars (Samurai vs White haired skinny advanced aliens) , Greed's parasitism, and the battle of Morroc Valley happened.
Back then, he was still called by his real name, Ace Randall.





I'm bad at dialouge T^T

comments? I also accept critisizms

So why is that all the lines are very soft and fairly clean but parts of the speech bubbles are very rough and poorly drawn?

if I wanted to read a comic about a guy named Guts with a big sword I'd read Berserk. ;¬)

Not bad, but you're noticeably lacking when it comes to drawing hands, if you're going to be doing a comic, and one about fighting of all things you should probably look into practicing that. Another thing, less about art and more about comics in general, a character that's OP straight from the start is much harder to write, and runs the risk of boring your audience. It might seem cool to you to have your mc just plow through anything effortlessly but it isn't interesting to read at all. Try and strike a balance if this is the direction you plan to go in.

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Not bad, but you're noticeably lacking when it comes to drawing hands, if you're going to be doing a comic, and one about fighting of all things you should probably look into practicing that. Another thing, less about art and more about comics in general, a character that's OP straight from the start is much harder to write, and runs the risk of boring your audience. It might seem cool to you to have your mc just plow through anything effortlessly but it isn't interesting to read at all. Try and strike a balance if this is the direction you plan to go in.

Looking at what Drone mentions, a good source to look into is One-Punch Man. As the name states, he can defeat most things in one punch.

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So why is that all the lines are very soft and fairly clean but parts of the speech bubbles are very rough and poorly drawn?

I made the drawing in SAI but since there no texts in SAI, the speech bubbles and the texts are made in photoshop. And I have no idea how to smoothen the pencil in photoshop XD

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Not bad, but you're noticeably lacking when it comes to drawing hands, if you're going to be doing a comic, and one about fighting of all things you should probably look into practicing that. Another thing, less about art and more about comics in general, a character that's OP straight from the start is much harder to write, and runs the risk of boring your audience. It might seem cool to you to have your mc just plow through anything effortlessly but it isn't interesting to read at all. Try and strike a balance if this is the direction you plan to go in.

Alright. I'll be practicing at drawing hands and look for references.
And he will not be the main point of view as the story goes. Just like in Gintama where it's Shinpachi's or the other side character's point of view was shown instead of Gintoki.

Lol drone, guts is weak. This fight scene is probably hapenning in his dreams XD
Its hard to differenciate the characters though, maybe with a different haircut, hair color or skin color? Idk

Also, shouldn't this thread be in community project?

Nah, it's completely fine here, it can go either or though I suppose

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Nah, it's completely fine here, it can go either or though I suppose

Ya i agree, it would fit both descriptions.