Stick Page Forums Archive

Please Delete This.

Started by: ScatterFace | Replies: 3 | Views: 1,495

ScatterFace
2

Posts: 1,281
Joined: Dec 2014
Rep: 10

View Profile
May 25, 2015 1:50 AM #1365345
...
JohnyBravo
2

Posts: 181
Joined: Apr 2015
Rep: 10

View Profile
May 25, 2015 9:32 AM #1365402
Why do I always see you posting other animations... what's happening with our battle, you still drawin?
As for the speedbattle.

Scatter - Bit choppy and on some of the frames the limbs weren't connecting as they should. The 2nd hit with the hilt of the sword din't look like a hit, I think you should have added a bit more waiting before hitting. And the transformation was awesome, but again it was just soooo damn fast I had to stop the animation and look at it frame by frame. Overall you need work on: force, limb connection, a little bit fx and slowing down some movements so we could really see what's going on.

Voracious - It started out very good. You just had to keep on the flow with 3-4 more hits man and it could have been awesome. Doe the close ups/angles weren't bad at all. The big black ball that was Hound was quite bad, it din't look like it bounced - just flew across the screen and then when it hit your RHG, Hound just vanished. Also you resized. Aaand the tentacle was a little bit too wobbly and fast.

P.S. I know my english is bad I hope you understood my CnC. :D

I give my vote to XxScatterxX because his animation had more action and I liked it more :) Good luck guys may the odds be ever in your favour! :D
ScatterFace
2

Posts: 1,281
Joined: Dec 2014
Rep: 10

View Profile
May 27, 2015 7:49 PM #1366337
Quote from JohnyBravo
Why do I always see you posting other animations... what's happening with our battle, you still drawin?
As for the speedbattle.

Scatter - Bit choppy and on some of the frames the limbs weren't connecting as they should. The 2nd hit with the hilt of the sword din't look like a hit, I think you should have added a bit more waiting before hitting. And the transformation was awesome, but again it was just soooo damn fast I had to stop the animation and look at it frame by frame. Overall you need work on: force, limb connection, a little bit fx and slowing down some movements so we could really see what's going on.

Voracious - It started out very good. You just had to keep on the flow with 3-4 more hits man and it could have been awesome. Doe the close ups/angles weren't bad at all. The big black ball that was Hound was quite bad, it din't look like it bounced - just flew across the screen and then when it hit your RHG, Hound just vanished. Also you resized. Aaand the tentacle was a little bit too wobbly and fast.

P.S. I know my english is bad I hope you understood my CnC. :D

I give my vote to XxScatterxX because his animation had more action and I liked it more :) Good luck guys may the odds be ever in your favour! :D


Dun worry. My battle is still in the works :)
TheBestG

Posts: 546
Joined: May 2014
Rep: 10

View Profile
May 27, 2015 8:49 PM #1366384
Voted for scatter, more action

Voracious- The first hit didn't seems like a hit.

Scatter-Most of the time they are looking down
Website Version: 1.0.4
© 2025 Max Games. All rights reserved.