Red -REBORN-

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May 28, 2015 9:30 AM #1366702
--RED--
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--CLAN--
--PING-- : A Millisecond makes a difference...(Leader)

--ABILITIES--
After his retreat and meditation, he has overcome the evil that dwells within his unholy garment.
He has unlocked new abilities and therefore does not rely on his scarf anymore.

--RY Abilities--
The Will of the Wielder

When Red found this holy blade deep within the caverns of his distant hometown, he was tested.
The blade's consciousness was deeply moved by his will to break free of his dark power. It submits to Red.

Red will be able to move the blade at his will.

The Worthy

The blade only submits to it's owner or anyone of equal will. (Kind of like Thor's hammer)

Gust

This is the hidden mana powering Red's blade. This mana is used when he uses his Will.
However, he can also burst the blade's mana, making it expand using his own mana. He will be tired during the process, but the mana burst has energy equivalent to ten times the Earth's gravitational pull. This time, the force is exerted outwards.

Flame of The Ancients

The blade will disperse flames if it comes into contact with Red's target. These flames are not as hot as Alfa's blade thrusters. It is as hot as regular fire, but focused into one point.

--Ry Bulg Abilities--

Ry Bulg is Ry with an extended handle. The handle has a hidden barrel at it's end containing huge amounts of mana and will be able to be dispersed at high speeds and power. Ry Bulg contains Ry's power, higher range, and handling.

Ry Bulg!

Red fuses his scarf's mana with Ry to make an extended handle. His scarf's dark mana is then contained at the bottom, and it converts into natural mana when it passes through the blade.

Disperse! Mana Blast!

Red uses the extra mana in the lance's barrel and disperse it into one point.

--Weakness--

Red now uses mana instead of dark energy from his scarf to avoid it's control. Find some way to deplete it.

His sword as Ry is heavy to you, but not to him. When you prove yourself as worthy as he is, it will also bend to your will. Which means Game Over for Red.

Ry Bulg's power all comes from the tip of his lance. Cut that off, and he will be forced to use Ry only. And his ranged attacks will be reduced to zero.

His sword is unbreakable. The Lance isn't. Now, if you would only find some way to make him drop the sword.

Red requires Will to control Ry and Ry Bulg. Make him lose focus and you win.

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--Weapons--
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(Message me for the Download Link)

--Demo--

Using Ry
Using Ry-Bulg
New Demo = http://sta.sh/01kj3ry4q7et

UPCOMING DEMO : Red Returns!(With angles and everything)
Progress : Storyboarding


--Battles--
None


--Score--
2/0/1


--Unavailable : Battling Seagull/BEATS--

--Hitlist--

Pride/xRAGEx -- "When Thoroar beat me, he said "Oh and one more thing. I met this person named Pride. He might be a worthy opponent." Let's see what you got."
Orikazu/vianbni -- "My other-dimensional counterpart says he was your clan member. Let's see if your worthy to have me."
Triton/Drone -- "A time will come when I will come to par with you. It may be a long time. But it's not impossible."
Alfa/Terkoiz -- "Because why not?"
Umbrella/Resh -- "Someday I will improve. And in that day we shall do battle."
Red Blade/MarkXD -- "There will be only one true Red"
Dithrium/Jazzon -- "Joker died. -SPOILER-. You weren't there to protect him."
OverKill/Terroarc -- "There must be a reason Claw chose you as a leader. This time. I won't be so easy to recruit. Let's see if you have what it takes to handle me."
Zen/Raigindxdemon -- "The first one to neglect my opposition. Smart, I'll give him that. It only makes it a lot more fun if he knows what he's doing."


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May 28, 2015 9:39 AM #1366707
yeay, it's up
cool as always

i'll battle you someday
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May 28, 2015 10:00 AM #1366714
Now to shut my eyes and sleep since I've been working on this whole day.
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May 28, 2015 10:53 AM #1366723
Nice! Great abilities, weaknesses, story, demo, all of it. The only thing wrong with it for me is that Ry Bulg doesn't look like much of a lance.
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May 28, 2015 11:15 AM #1366730
Quote from Ashero
Nice! Great abilities, weaknesses, story, demo, all of it. The only thing wrong with it for me is that Ry Bulg doesn't look like much of a lance.


Yeah I think it looks more like a pole-axe or a pole-arm. Cuz it's short and one sided.
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May 28, 2015 1:21 PM #1366757
Quote from StickBoy111
Yeah I think it looks more like a pole-axe or a pole-arm. Cuz it's short and one sided.


https://www.google.com/search?q=glaive&rlz=1C1CHFX_enUS603US603&espv=2&biw=1366&bih=599&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=sBVnVeCZFcnVsAWhnIHICA&ved=0CAYQ_AUoAQ

now i'm really looking forward to the rematch. but i'll be working on 3 different fights before that.
also, thanks for the input of thor in the story.
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May 28, 2015 1:36 PM #1366765
Quote from xRAGEx
https://www.google.com/search?q=glaive&rlz=1C1CHFX_enUS603US603&espv=2&biw=1366&bih=599&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=sBVnVeCZFcnVsAWhnIHICA&ved=0CAYQ_AUoAQ

now i'm really looking forward to the rematch. but i'll be working on 3 different fights before that.
also, thanks for the input of thor in the story.


Oh so that's a glaive.

I'm not copying you alright? I just thought adding taller handle is cooler and I didn't realize it was a glaive as well. Sorry lol.

And besides, with your current skill,I'll lose in a flash.

Wait until I finish about 2 - 3 battles or somethin. Then we throw down.

EDIT : Added hitlist
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May 28, 2015 4:52 PM #1366817
Nice effects on the second demo..
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May 28, 2015 6:04 PM #1366825
I feel like the weapon grips are far too thin. But I like their colour scheme and how they're not ruined with gradients.
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May 28, 2015 7:02 PM #1366829
Quote from WafflesMgee
I feel like the weapon grips are far too thin. But I like their colour scheme and how they're not ruined with gradients.

I feel base colors suit my animating style.

It's not good to see an animation with a quality of 5 and the weapon of 9.

Gotta balance everything. Yunno
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May 28, 2015 7:08 PM #1366831
Quote from StickBoy111
I feel base colors suit my animating style.

It's not good to see an animation with a quality of 5 and the weapon of 9.

Gotta balance everything. Yunno


someone gets it

but it seems to be a widely-loved thing to give a single-colour stickman (maybe sometimes with like a scarf) a weapon with gradients and detail like damn.

Also, here's an example on a grip idea:

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May 28, 2015 10:27 PM #1366914
by the way, if you want our stories to entwine, don't have throar die (if you were planning on him dying) he will be part of pride's story at one point, and that's how i'm going to tie red into pride's fights. :B
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May 28, 2015 11:21 PM #1366930
Wow so in depth with the abilities
Ima fight you one day >:c

But seriously, this is really cool Stick. Gj buddy
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May 29, 2015 3:27 AM #1366983
Oh don't forget to add me on your hitlist bruh!
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May 29, 2015 4:36 AM #1366992
Quote from xRAGEx
by the way, if you want our stories to entwine, don't have throar die (if you were planning on him dying) he will be part of pride's story at one point, and that's how i'm going to tie red into pride's fights. :B


Yeah I'll change it. I don't want him die too :v

BTW There's a reason i put -SPOILER- in Jazzon's part. You'll see in late July/early August.


@waffles Yeah I'll increase the width of the handle. I feel it's too thin for it's own good and the physics wouldn't work. At all.