Multiple Stickfight> http://sta.sh/02czazjceq3u
Rushed Practice> http://sta.sh/01i25yfpawoi
Smokesss> http://sta.sh/01xi5w57j3ht
Another smookeeess> http://sta.sh/01x1xykmuuwo
Would you CC For me?? :<
Combo and Stuff hueuhueuhue
Started by: alandylan12 | Replies: 3 | Views: 443
Jun 7, 2015 8:03 AM #1370404
Jun 7, 2015 8:15 AM #1370408
Ok, let's see...
1. The first anime lacked easing, try to fix that, other than that, it was pretty good!
2.Ok, i get it, Inspired by Terk, but the warmup was very bad, the stickman's toes shouldn't move, only his shoulders. The easing was better.
3. Jaw-drops, this is amazing! I can't do smoke, teach me, Senpai!!!
4. This one was also amazing, but not enough particles...
And Pro-Tip: You may animate how you like, but you can just draw one line for the body and then bend it, just a tip if you're using line.
Like i said, this is ED-CELLENT (forgot my meme at home)
1. The first anime lacked easing, try to fix that, other than that, it was pretty good!
2.Ok, i get it, Inspired by Terk, but the warmup was very bad, the stickman's toes shouldn't move, only his shoulders. The easing was better.
3. Jaw-drops, this is amazing! I can't do smoke, teach me, Senpai!!!
4. This one was also amazing, but not enough particles...
And Pro-Tip: You may animate how you like, but you can just draw one line for the body and then bend it, just a tip if you're using line.
Like i said, this is ED-CELLENT (forgot my meme at home)
Jun 7, 2015 8:42 AM #1370415
Quote from Kanga-BOk, let's see...
1. The first anime lacked easing, try to fix that, other than that, it was pretty good!
2.Ok, i get it, Inspired by Terk, but the warmup was very bad, the stickman's toes shouldn't move, only his shoulders. The easing was better.
3. Jaw-drops, this is amazing! I can't do smoke, teach me, Senpai!!!
4. This one was also amazing, but not enough particles...
And Pro-Tip: You may animate how you like, but you can just draw one line for the body and then bend it, just a tip if you're using line.
Like i said, this is ED-CELLENT (forgot my meme at home)
lel, at 2nd Animation. i actually just rushed and not focusing on perfecting movement :>
Jun 11, 2015 12:42 AM #1371552
Both 1 and 2, your movements lack a consistent definition.
Like at some very good points it's easy to tell what's going on and other times there's some movement that just don't make much sense.
That is, while you're doing your fighting/combo stuff everything's pretty easy to watch and when there's no fighting there's almost NO effort put into it.
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I see you say it's rushed and all, but at some point or another if you start putting effort into the movements outside of combat,
your animations will really start to come to life.
Otherwise the combat looks decent.
3 is good for what it is, no criticism for it.
4 dissipates too quickly. It's doesn't have to have more particles, it's just the final dispersing of smoke around the top and right happens quicker than the rest.
Just looks very odd.
Like at some very good points it's easy to tell what's going on and other times there's some movement that just don't make much sense.
That is, while you're doing your fighting/combo stuff everything's pretty easy to watch and when there's no fighting there's almost NO effort put into it.
-
I see you say it's rushed and all, but at some point or another if you start putting effort into the movements outside of combat,
your animations will really start to come to life.
Otherwise the combat looks decent.
3 is good for what it is, no criticism for it.
4 dissipates too quickly. It's doesn't have to have more particles, it's just the final dispersing of smoke around the top and right happens quicker than the rest.
Just looks very odd.