Age: 18

Color: #00FF00

Abilities: Synden uses the power of energy and gets stronger every time he gets damaged. He wears a ring on his arm to use his powers. Without it, Synden cannot use his powers. His attacks range from hand-to-hand combat, to using energy blasts. He can also use his powers to make a shield(which can break), or to do combos. Synden can be a bit tricky to fighters, for he is known for speed and strength.

Weaknesses: -Vulnerable to Gas and Fire
-Energy blasts drain down Synden's strength.
-If he loses his ring, he cannot use energy.
-His energy shield can break




Synden was a young boy when his parents gave him a ring for his arm. They told him to meet Master Gim (A trainer) at a shack. When he did, he was taught the power of energy. A few years later, Master Gim was murdered by The Great Hawk Gang. A notorious gang which were all over Synden's hometown. With his powers, Synden managed to take on the Hawks, and keep Olkem (his hometown on another planet) safe. He was later sent down to Earth where he now wants to be an RHG fighter!

Demo: http://filz.us/2xYG

Avalibility: Not yet. Still need to work on my animation skills. :p:p:p

Score: 0/0/0


Hitlist:

So where do I begin.

The demo.

I like the idea... Tha- that's about everything I like about the animation.


First off, use onion skin. It's quite bothering to look at a stick randomly wobbling all over the place.

Practice these :

Consistency(No resizing ^^)
Flow(Ahh, yeah, study this last)
Onion Skin (very damn important)
Stick Construction (right now it looks like a blob of green mess instead of a stickman)
Easing(Don't just skip from one action and then make another pop out of nowhere)
Physics(Basically gravity, speed, and all that)



Practice all mentioned and you should be making a good head start as a good stick animator. After all, we all start from somewhere. :D

Other than that, you have potential! For a new animator I can say you're... Above... Very newbie-ish, I mean, better than me when I began flash animation.

I used to use GIMP back then... Hah.. Memories... Then I learned about onion skins and all the basic stuff through Pivot.

Good luck on your future endeavors!

^What StickBoy said. I just wanted to say three things

1) Brush smoothing is all about preference, but try to lower it.

2) when animating sticks (or anything), try using guidelines to mantain the "Consistency"

3) I don't want to make anyone feel bad about their animations, this was a good first try, take your time, learn, and practice the things that StickBoy pointed out.

but i just laughed when i saw this frame: http://i.imgur.com/tloU1iI.png

Yeah. I'm only 13. I am currently checking out Hyun's tutorials so that i can get better.

Good luck with that.. It seems like a nice concept.
Never give up >:O

i like the idea of this rhg,but keep practicing all the things SB said,and youll be very good


but i still need a crap ton of practice

If you dont use a pen tablet and you use the brush tool, i recommend using the line tool and curving them to make it more like a stick figure. i also recommend making a cool name for "the power of energy". like name it his home town Olkem or something like that. unless the power of energy is like electricity or something like that, then try to think of a different name for it, because that sorta sounds a little lazy.

Battles and Points aren't the same thing and they need two seperate sections