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Jun 29, 2015 4:53 PM #1377418
FINALLY someone posted. I can talk again without editing so I better make this one count... Sort of

Will there be clan signatures and rules for the members? Because the clan seems very .. Bare bones right now. Which is ok :D

Also HI WAFFLES
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Jun 29, 2015 5:05 PM #1377420
I always check the newest posts. Don't be like that if you see me just viewing a thread.
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Jun 29, 2015 5:18 PM #1377425
XD but I've made it my sworn duty to say hi to you whenever I see you

also another thing about the clan. Are you going to post tryouts? You know to see how the members got into the clan?
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Jun 29, 2015 10:45 PM #1377479
OK Pitch...
I CnC'ed yours, and Chaotic Penguin is doing it right now.
There will be no clan signatures. I don't feel like it is needed. The other ones don't need it.
This is not a RHG clan.
Rules will be incoming, but here are three.
1. Do not skip weekly's unless you tell me beforehand or have something important during the time.
2. Respect ALL wRHG members.
3. Try your best.
As soon as Chaotic finishes, we will give our combined statement.
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Jun 29, 2015 11:14 PM #1377483
Oh ok. If I get accepted I'll be sure to follow those rules
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Jul 1, 2015 12:21 PM #1377938
Okay guys...
I've made my decision.
Pitch is NOT in Blade Mercenaries.
Reason: Me and Chaotic feel that you could've done a bit more. Maybe more words, more detail. Work on detail, grammar, and word count.
Sorry Pitch. You can try again if you wish.
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Jul 1, 2015 12:49 PM #1377943
Ok makes sense but more words? I had 600+ words..you said I only needed 500
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Jul 1, 2015 1:28 PM #1377955
PitchEnder has a point. If 500 is not enough, you shouldn't say it is.

I suggest raising the minimum as to give the tryouts less disappointments.
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Jul 1, 2015 4:42 PM #1377985
Quote from Urako
PitchEnder has a point. If 500 is not enough, you shouldn't say it is.

I suggest raising the minimum as to give the tryouts less disappointments.


Wait... there was a word limit? I wasn't aware of this. =.=
Give me a bit while I sort this out Pitch...
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Jul 1, 2015 4:45 PM #1377988
Quote from Chaotic Penguin
Wait... there was a word limit? I wasn't aware of this. =.=
Give me a bit while I sort this out Pitch...


I said minimum. Although i suppose there is some sort of word limit since people won't read things that are too long.
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Jul 1, 2015 4:55 PM #1377990
Quote from Urako
I said minimum. Although i suppose there is some sort of word limit since people won't read things that are too long.


Sorry I meant minimum -.-
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Jul 1, 2015 4:56 PM #1377991
Yeah when i got the tryout he told me there was a 500 word minimum

Hm … detail..
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Jul 1, 2015 10:31 PM #1378111
Alright....
Sorry about that Pitch...
But still, I would like a bit more detail.
Like, instead of me throwing a punch, I think Kiro would've been putting on his brass knuckles and THEN doing a punch. Because him doing a punch can't dent a robot.
But yeah. I will read the story again, and Pitch, you have another chance.
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Jul 1, 2015 10:33 PM #1378113
Thank you for giving me another chance ^_^
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Jul 1, 2015 10:45 PM #1378121
"The steel door swung open with a loud creak. Kiro walked in and stared at Lost. "Mr.Lost, we have reviewed your skills, and you are..."
"In. Congrats. Welcome to Blade."
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