First off, before you continue, fix those damned annoying white fills for the teeth that aren't there for many frames, and the messed up mouth on the second shot of the blond kid. The mouth, to me, is not only the most mess up-able feature of a character, but when it's messed up, it's the most bothersome feature. It's why I try not to animate mouths. When I don't need them I don't use them.

The fullbody work is great. I love most of this.

Are you sure the audio, the screeching horror music at the beginning fits an action scene? Not that it matters.

The motions are nice and well done.

On the first shot, red hair guy is standing up, and in the second, he is down. Intentional?

What are you trying to do in the second shot of the blond kid right before he jumps? Why did you mess with his mouth and his shirt collar in the middle of the shot? I'm just curious, because it makes the entire angle and view just strange to look at when the distorting and such happens with no speaking to accompany it with.

It may help to tell you how I will work in my fullbody shit. I have a 3 minute music video due february and beginning in august when school starts, and I've got a planned work thing. I got a plan to do and such. First I draw all of the backgrounds to get that annoying shit out of the way, and simultaneously, if music has to do with the animation, I put the song in, and configure the scenes along with the music, then I do vcam work, with or without music. After that, I do any background movie clip or effect work, and anything else that needs to be done in the background, that isn't the main attention of the film. Now I have all of the duration I need. I'm not worried about time management or anything anymore, just making the scenes work out. and making the motions and such fit along with any music.

Next is to do the characters. Simple. I draw the bodies, and heads and such, and depending on what happens in the scene, I either do frame by frame, or tweening with necessary frame by frame. After the 2 or so months of sketchy character motion drawing and all that, I fill in, and color. Then lip syncing, then retouching until the deadline.

You think that works? I think so myself, but I think it may be helpful for you to see how other plans go through. You seem to be the person to draw a sketch, then right after that draw the same complete frame after the sketch, except, it seems, in that last fighting scene of course. :P. If true, the constant transitions waste valuable minutes, and you might end up completing frames you don't need, or need to fill more in, having to complete another frame. I dunno. =/

Good luck in the last edit. It looks really good.

Also, the blood on the first person's mouth disappeared. Was that blood?

thanks, but its not finished.so i already no that stuff. lol any comments that can help me improve?

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It's really nice, dude.

Really like the fighting as always.

thanks, but adding the hair, then colorng everything, then adding a bg is gona be killer.

it will all come together eventually....like i said earlier...your killing me with the blank faces!!!! :Bricked: lol

ill fix that later

THAT. IS. AWESUM.


That is all i can say


ftw

did you leik, ignor me???

Make it prettier.

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ill fix that later to, lol