http://ahmadam.deviantart.com/art/Punk-542877250

A little improvement. I need to practice more.

Damn i gotta love that coloring and pose

Quote from Ipman

Damn i gotta love that coloring and pose

Aye thanks man.

oooh man you really improved on this one. Much more detailed and more planned out, and that shirt design... lmao it fits so well
Things you should add:
1) Hands should receive some black reflections when swagged into those pants
2) Arm should receive purple reflections
3) Shoes should receive black reflections
Reflected light plz

My personal preferences:
1) Head to Neck drop shadow can be a bit more violent
2) Shirt feels flat, add folds OR define edge shape
3) Cast more shadow on himself. It'll be a more interesting composition
4) Those chains should float a bit to make room for drop shadow.

Things you might've just forgot :) :
1) Drop shadow of sunglasses, eyebrows, hair, shirt, belts on those pants, and the entire body against the rim light.
2) Left plane of his right pocket should receive a lighted side when the hand is tucked in.
3) His left arm's shoulder muscles are twisted towards us.

Quote from ArmyAnt

oooh man you really improved on this one. Much more detailed and more planned out, and that shirt design... lmao it fits so well
Things you should add:
1) Hands should receive some black reflections when swagged into those pants
2) Arm should receive purple reflections
3) Shoes should receive black reflections
Reflected light plz

My personal preferences:
1) Head to Neck drop shadow can be a bit more violent
2) Shirt feels flat, add folds OR define edge shape
3) Cast more shadow on himself. It'll be a more interesting composition
4) Those chains should float a bit to make room for drop shadow.

Things you might've just forgot :) :
1) Drop shadow of sunglasses, eyebrows, hair, shirt, belts on those pants, and the entire body against the rim light.
2) Left plane of his right pocket should receive a lighted side when the hand is tucked in.
3) His left arm's shoulder muscles are twisted towards us.

Holy moly thanks a lot man. All noted!