http://ahmadam.deviantart.com/art/Punk-542877250
A little improvement. I need to practice more.
Punk
Started by: Salt | Replies: 4 | Views: 608
Jun 29, 2015 2:23 PM #1377385
Jun 29, 2015 4:04 PM #1377409
Damn i gotta love that coloring and pose
Jun 30, 2015 10:44 AM #1377592
Quote from IpmanDamn i gotta love that coloring and pose
Aye thanks man.
Jul 1, 2015 7:08 PM #1378026
oooh man you really improved on this one. Much more detailed and more planned out, and that shirt design... lmao it fits so well
Things you should add:
1) Hands should receive some black reflections when swagged into those pants
2) Arm should receive purple reflections
3) Shoes should receive black reflections
Reflected light plz
My personal preferences:
1) Head to Neck drop shadow can be a bit more violent
2) Shirt feels flat, add folds OR define edge shape
3) Cast more shadow on himself. It'll be a more interesting composition
4) Those chains should float a bit to make room for drop shadow.
Things you might've just forgot :) :
1) Drop shadow of sunglasses, eyebrows, hair, shirt, belts on those pants, and the entire body against the rim light.
2) Left plane of his right pocket should receive a lighted side when the hand is tucked in.
3) His left arm's shoulder muscles are twisted towards us.
Things you should add:
1) Hands should receive some black reflections when swagged into those pants
2) Arm should receive purple reflections
3) Shoes should receive black reflections
Reflected light plz
My personal preferences:
1) Head to Neck drop shadow can be a bit more violent
2) Shirt feels flat, add folds OR define edge shape
3) Cast more shadow on himself. It'll be a more interesting composition
4) Those chains should float a bit to make room for drop shadow.
Things you might've just forgot :) :
1) Drop shadow of sunglasses, eyebrows, hair, shirt, belts on those pants, and the entire body against the rim light.
2) Left plane of his right pocket should receive a lighted side when the hand is tucked in.
3) His left arm's shoulder muscles are twisted towards us.
Jul 2, 2015 12:53 AM #1378175
Quote from ArmyAntoooh man you really improved on this one. Much more detailed and more planned out, and that shirt design... lmao it fits so well
Things you should add:
1) Hands should receive some black reflections when swagged into those pants
2) Arm should receive purple reflections
3) Shoes should receive black reflections
Reflected light plz
My personal preferences:
1) Head to Neck drop shadow can be a bit more violent
2) Shirt feels flat, add folds OR define edge shape
3) Cast more shadow on himself. It'll be a more interesting composition
4) Those chains should float a bit to make room for drop shadow.
Things you might've just forgot :) :
1) Drop shadow of sunglasses, eyebrows, hair, shirt, belts on those pants, and the entire body against the rim light.
2) Left plane of his right pocket should receive a lighted side when the hand is tucked in.
3) His left arm's shoulder muscles are twisted towards us.
Holy moly thanks a lot man. All noted!