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Jul 2, 2015 5:27 AM #1378225
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Color: #990000

Clan:
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Trait:
She's a 17 years old "good" little girl that always try to piss off others and a Lesbeehonest.

Abilities:
Very agility and speed. She kicks most of the time.
Extremely good at throwing large combos.
She can use everything she has.
She can seduce others with her looking.

Weakness:
She cant stand a hit. If you can manage to hit her hard once. She absolutely crumbles...
Gay or someone isnt interested in girls.

Story:
Foxtail grew up an orphan and hasn't had much family to back her up. She joined RHG to prove that sometimes.
By the time she's in RHG world, she met a huge dogging name Magus. Foxtail sees him as a mighty brother.

Demo:
http://armand-anims.deviantart.com/art/Foxtail-combo-471804546
http://armand-anims.deviantart.com/art/Foxtail-combo3-471805524

This page still under construct until i get to computer, for edit through phone is simply not ever possible. Sigh.
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Jul 2, 2015 8:19 AM #1378262
Upload your image somewhere else Armand, people aren't going to be able to see it
also you need a points and a battles section
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Jul 3, 2015 3:24 AM #1378585
How do i upload img?
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Jul 3, 2015 3:42 AM #1378591
If she went up against my character, she'd get killed in one punch. My guy's a slow, tanking monster that houses no sexual desires whatsoever and can decimate walls in a punch.

Your character sucks, mate. You need something more well-rounded, the whole focus on gender and seduction makes this sound like a joke to me.
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Jul 3, 2015 4:03 AM #1378600
Just who do you think you are! O^O get out!
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Jul 3, 2015 4:14 AM #1378603
well,hes waffles,a beast pivoteer ,giving you adice,even though he could of done it a bit nicer

here use this
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Jul 3, 2015 4:16 AM #1378604
Quote from WafflesMgee
If she went up against my character, she'd get killed in one punch. My guy's a slow, tanking monster that houses no sexual desires whatsoever and can decimate walls in a punch.

Your character sucks, mate. You need something more well-rounded, the whole focus on gender and seduction makes this sound like a joke to me.

LOL IKR
but just keep those shot low dude
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Jul 3, 2015 4:16 AM #1378606
What he is, is dead meat! Ò^Ó
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Jul 3, 2015 4:19 AM #1378607
wow 3 clan leaders posting on your page.2 of wich are actually good.3 of three are pivoteers.thats pretty cool
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Jul 3, 2015 4:22 AM #1378608
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wow 3 clan leaders posting on your page.2 of wich are actually good.3 of three are pivoteers.thats pretty cool


No idea who you people are! O^O though i know rocker is nice!
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Jul 3, 2015 4:23 AM #1378609
I'm of harsh mind right now because it's 5AM and insomnia's made me stay up until then.

Look. Your RHG is underpowered, and would only be good against a certain range of characters. And the whole gender thing is a bit gimmicky.

If I'm right. Foxtail is a lass with ears and a fox's tail. So why not give her some foxlike abilities and weaknesses?

She can use everything she has.
She can seduce others with her looking.


These are useless.

And the only good weakness she has is the first one, she has very little defence and can't take hits.


For abilities I'd suggest give her great hearing and smell, so she could track. (They have their own weaknesses, loud noise and bad smells.) She could have claws and sharp teeth. Running fast is a thing foxes do but to balance that out you could have her only run fast when she's running on all fours. She could run up walls like that. Let her use the environment to her benefit.

To make up for her lack of defensive capabilities, give her good maneuvering capabilities. And "Very agility and speed" won't just cut it since 90% of all RHG characters have that. When everyone's fast, you all run at the same speed.

(And your demos don't work)
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Jul 3, 2015 4:23 AM #1378611
btw tbh this thing is kinda like a joke...
seduction?
think that will work?
my RHG is a fire powered genius strong enough to not have any mercy for a girl...
btw i cant see the demo
upload somewhere else
EDIT : Im sorry for being harsh
but just like Waffle's said atleast put some useful abilities that are related to her appearance and stuff
sorry once again for being harsh
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Jul 3, 2015 4:25 AM #1378612
thank you man,woman ,person,hopfully woman,cause it mightn be wierd if you were a man
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Jul 3, 2015 4:28 AM #1378614
The page will have more edit in about a week or 2 since i dont have access to computer at moment. Soon as i do will fix more stuff and make new demo. One that will pipe some you down! Ò^Ó
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Jul 3, 2015 4:29 AM #1378615
2 weeks is too long -.-
this will probably be in the back of the front page already
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