Shiyzu - The One Eyed Berserker

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Jul 4, 2015 6:15 PM #1379163
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Personality:
very serious




Age: Unknown

Name: Shiyzu

Weapon: Gray and blue sword



Ability:
Rage Mode: Once his Eye glows light blue he is 6x faster 8x stronger and 150x smarter
only for 3 hrs.

Weakness: Once he returns from rage mode he has drained most of his energy
which leaves him pretty vulnerable but he can still manage.

About:
Shiyzu ancestors were old time berserkers
and he's the 5th Generation.


Fun fact: He eats lots of tacos secretly lol

Battles:

None

Points:
0/0/0

Availability
Nope

Hit list
No one

Stats:
Wins0
Lose0
Draw0

Demo

https://youtu.be/hUmfF4IyCx4

Backstory:
Shiyzu is the 5th generation of his family of berserkers so he wants
to carry out what his family been doing for ages he also liked the idea of being
a erserkers so he came to rhg to fight worthy fighters.


Please make me art :)
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Jul 5, 2015 10:42 AM #1379486
So he doesn't have other abilities besides the rage mode?...why a rage mode though?
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Jul 5, 2015 10:49 AM #1379488
Rage mode is cliche and overdone

the weakness is something AFTER he uses his main ability and not something you can use against him whilst he uses his main ability


If I recall correctly, Berserkers were warriors who ingested hallucinogenic things before fighting and never wore any armour. This meant that they were absolutely fucking brutal and would attack foe AND friend alike because, well, they couldn't tell the difference.

A rage mode is just a form that's a direct upgrade. If this guy WAS going berserk, he'd just have rage as an emotion, not a mode, and would just be absolutely messy and about the place killing things.

Seriously, I'd believe about 40-30% of all RHGs have a rage mode and that isn't hyperbole. Change stuff around, man. Originality is what the character section craves and though I help others in order to bring it, I'm just one guy. Can't you fresh-faced folks have a gander of RHGs before you make one and attempt to make something creative and original (and hopefully not edgy)?
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Jul 5, 2015 10:54 AM #1379491
Quote from WafflesMgee
Rage mode is cliche and overdone

the weakness is something AFTER he uses his main ability and not something you can use against him whilst he uses his main ability


If I recall correctly, Berserkers were warriors who ingested hallucinogenic things before fighting and never wore any armour. This meant that they were absolutely fucking brutal and would attack foe AND friend alike because, well, they couldn't tell the difference.

A rage mode is just a form that's a direct upgrade. If this guy WAS going berserk, he'd just have rage as an emotion, not a mode, and would just be absolutely messy and about the place killing things.

Seriously, I'd believe about 40-30% of all RHGs have a rage mode and that isn't hyperbole. Change stuff around, man. Originality is what the character section craves and though I help others in order to bring it, I'm just one guy. Can't you fresh-faced folks have a gander of RHGs before you make one and attempt to make something creative and original (and hopefully not edgy)?


Was waiting for you to come lol..
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Jul 5, 2015 12:03 PM #1379519
I rofled at that 150x smarter....
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Jul 5, 2015 12:13 PM #1379526
Quote from programalpha
I rofled at that 150x smarter....


Lmao...Yeah me too
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Jul 5, 2015 10:12 PM #1379776
This RHG is clearly rushed and the ability alone already consist of a cliché: ragemode. This is already showing u hardly put any effort into this RHG. ;/
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Jul 5, 2015 10:43 PM #1379787
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Jul 5, 2015 11:07 PM #1379798
6x faster 8x stronger and 150x smarter
only for 3 hrs...

ONLY for 3 hours??? That's a LONG TIME... especially since he is 150x smarter during this phase.
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Jul 5, 2015 11:41 PM #1379805
Quote from programalpha
I rofled at that 150x smarter....



Lmao yeah I knew someone was gonna laugh at that one
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Jul 6, 2015 5:47 AM #1379864
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Lmao yeah I knew someone was gonna laugh at that one


Though your rhg lacks real abilities...
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Jul 6, 2015 6:40 AM #1379875
I feel like your RHG has 1 OP ability with no weaknesses, mainly because an RHG battle won't last 3 hours...
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Jul 6, 2015 8:31 AM #1379892
Quote from InnoSinn
I feel like your RHG has 1 OP ability with no weaknesses, mainly because an RHG battle won't last 3 hours...
Unless the opposing RHG had time traveling abilities. XDD