Unfinished animation, currently in progress

criticize and comment,
much appreciated.

http://filz.us/2yZm

I already have a storyboard for this, just need to animate.

Not bad. The shots are pretty good, from a cinematic point of view it's a good storyboard. The way you sketched and drew it isn't exactly eye pleasing though. You should work on you drawing skills (gesture, form, etc.) The animation was pretty stiff and slow. Sometimes it looked alright, others it felt like 'meh'. You should study the basics of animation of more and try to look at references. That walk was pretty wonky.

There's only one word...

"Lazy"

haha. thank you for the attention. I'll do it properly next animation.

i like it so far, but a lot of the moments where the camera is shaking, it looks like an earth quake is going on, make the camera move slower and add a bit more color (unless its not meant to have color)

thanks for telling me about the camera shake. I did noticed it was wrong. im going to make it slower. and I meant to make it black to have that lonely feel.

I liked those cinematic, but the vcam movements and that walk were weird. Good job tho

:) this preview is on 50%, so have already edited the awkward parts and have added some new scenes. I'm going to post the 99% preview here when it's done
Those who will CnC 3 days before the release will be added to the credits, mehehehe