Name: The Shadowolf

Abilities:


(one sniper gun, one machine gun) built into it, and a long-handled tungsten spear.

The buckler is made to his own secret specifications. It is essentially indestructible as far as pure physical forces are concerned. "Essentially indestructible" is used to indicate that while there is little that would actually damage it, he cannot just have the moon crash land on him and still be fine (yeah, that's a bit of a hyperbole, but I made my point).The leading edge of the buckler is sharpened into a broad-blade, and the tips of both gun barrels are pointed, making it a useful weapon for melee aggression as well. Shado has mind-blowing marksmanship, with his preferred ammo being gold. There are no clips or chambers for either gun, since he generates the bullets himself, thus giving him an infinite supply.

The spear is massive and long. The head is tear-drop shaped, making only the tip portion of it razor sharp, while the rest slowly dulls as the head broadens. **SHADO'S NUCLEAR CAPABILITIES ARE SOON TO BE REMOVED VIA AN ADDITION TO HIS STORY. DISREGARD THIS INFORMATION. UNTIL THEN, HOWEVER, YOU CHARACTER SHOULD AT LEAST THINK SHADO MIGHT USE THE NUKE. DO NOT EVER HAVE SHADO USE IT. I WILL NOT BE USING IT EITHER.** Inside the head is a small amount of plutonium imbedded into it, allowing him to detonate nuclear explosions. While these are not "Hiroshima" explosions, they will cover an area of about one city block (this is the primary blast zone of maximum damage. The actual effected area is closer to four square miles, but much of that will receive little more than some extra heat, wind, and radiation), indicating the size of the spear head.

Both the spear and the buckler-guns can be generated at will.[/Spoiler]
ving him the respective strength, speed, claws, fangs, hearing, smell, night vision, and "6th sense." I will address these point by point as follows:

Strength -- Shado's strength is indeed incredible. Chunking a car a short distance is no problem for him. He is not going to be catching any crashing jet-liners, however, or stopping the plate movements during an earthquake. Nothing doin, kiddo. Go ask the guy in ballet tights...
He is also no hulk...he is quite destructible, and a bullet to his bare face will kill him (providing he has not cooked up some crazy means of protecting himself aside from his usual armor).

In a straight up fight, however, he will easily overpower any opponent not as physically empowered as himself.

Speed -- His top speed lands him around 40 mile per hour. This is only applies to his bare (aside from clothes) body. Every single item you add to that, and his top speed drops. Thus, if he has coated himself in a thick layer of armor, AND is wielding his buckler and spear, he probably won't do more than about 10 mph, and that's hoofing it.

Related to speed is agility. Shado is remarkably flexible, but must be remembered to possess a normal skeletal structure. You tie him in a knot, you break a hell of a lot of bones.
His reaction time is definitely superhuman, but not supernatural, if you get the picture. If some master marksman is raining bullets on him, Shado will walk away (or not, as the case may be...) resembling a mesh sieve. He can anticipate actions, however, thus allowing him to...say....dodge single-shot or three-shot bullets. The same principle applies to all other attacks as well -- if they are faster than the eye can see, then Shado won't be seeing them, and therefore won't be dodging them. End of story.

Claws and Fangs -- These are of a size proportionate to his physique. Claws are thick, and about four inches long; but due to their sharp curve, they only extend two inches past his fingertips. They are always present.
His fangs (aka incisors or canines) are about two inches long, and almost perfectly straight, though usually concealed by his lips…unless, of course, he is using them.
Both of these can be coated with metal to enhance their cutting ability and durability.

Hearing and Smell – These are per the normal abilities of a wild wolf. Since Animal Planet, Natgeo, PBS Nature, etc, etc, etc. have already thoroughly covered that, I will only make a few notes;

His ears can move (see appearance), allowing him to pinpoint sounds perfectly, in addition to allowing him to listen to two different things at the same time.

He can smell aspects that humans would consider “telepathic.” Namely, these include emotions, mental state, full physical appearance, and health. No aspect of these can be hidden from his sense of smell. As a side note, his nose will provide him with a full description of a person’s sexuality. While this (typically) has little impact on a battle (might be veeerrrrryyyy “interesting” if it did…hehehe…srry…), it does affect his evaluation of someone.

These incredible senses allow him to function blind with surprising skill, including accurate ranged attacks. Still, if it cannot be heard or smelled (with reference to his heightened senses, not a human’s), then he will not know it is there (without sight).

Night Vision-- If there is the slightest, the tiniest, the most miniscule light source, Shado can see. Pitch-black darkness, however, will render him sightless (until he figures out a way to light things up…).

Sixth Sense – Shado can sense the presence of any being, along with a general evaluation of them (emphasis on general…). This can extend up to a distance of thirty miles, but that range decreases dramatically as other beings (I say beings to include non-human entities) become involved. The presence of just five other beings near him or his opponent will drop that range down to fifteen miles, ten beings – seven and a half miles, twenty – 3.75 miles…etc. The minimum range is about a half mile.

Whenever a being has an increased focus on him (Shado), however, that increases the “link,” thus allowing him to sense a being four miles away in the middle of a city street, for example. The more intense the focus of the being on Shado, the more Shado can “override” the impact of surrounding beings.

Lastly, this Sixth Sense gives him a small level of empowerment based upon his abilities and affinities. In short, his metallic abilities gives him a resistance to heat and radiation. The fact that his power is derived from a supernatural source gives him a resistance to demonic/angelic/magical attacks. Lastly, because of the Reaver’s blessing (see Story), his physiological status is enhanced, allowing him to push through intense pain, take unnatural amounts of damage, and have resistance to poison/illness. It is important here to specify that “resistance” does not mean “immunity” – it just means that its potency against him is greatly reduced.[/Spoiler]
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Weaknesses
His powers are limited to the more dense metals (iron being on the lighter side of his abilities, you can generally reference his powers based off of that: if it is less dense than iron, he cannot control it, and vice-versa. Without evaluating a periodic table at this moment, I cannot give the exact barrier. I might add that later with a link to a periodic table. For now, iron will have to do.). Also, see his Abilities – Dark Metal Powers for info regarding limits on generating capabilities.

2) His buckler is relatively small, so helps little against area-effect skills. The most he can do is protect his head and upper torso in this circumstance. Also, it can be damaged by explosive and magical attacks, forcing him to either abandon it or repair it. Once damaged, its effectiveness against physical forces is reduced as well.

Unfortunately, the high mass and size that makes his spear so deadly a melee weapon and thrown missile also renders it rather slow in close action. He will usually either try to do a single, sweeping blow to knock his foes away, or switch to his claws and powers.

3) Despite the many benefits of being part lycan, it also affects his close-combat speed. For one -- or even two or three -- rapid attacks, his foes will find he has remarkable agility and reactions. He is no ninja, though, and will end up on the worst end of the deal in a close, high-speed combat. He will usually try to get out of this situation quickly, or land one massive blow that tips the scales in his favor. To be blunt, as far as close combat is concerned...HE SUCKS!

4) Shado has been into the Netherworld and back. There is not much that can frighten him. He cannot, however, help instincts. If he senses death – not an aggressive sense, but just nameless death – it will usually set him on edge. Illness has a similar effect, though less drastic (though often certain illnesses will give him a sense of death).

5) Shado hates to kill (or cause to be killed) an innocent person. If he can stop someone from killing an innocent person, he will do so. He will surrender himself before he lets someone innocent die. This does not mean that he can be taken for a fool, though. He will carefully weigh his options, and has been known to allow innocent people to die, or even to kill them himself, if it is for a greater good.
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[Spoiler=Rationalizing The Shadowolf -- is he really an OP Toolbox?]
This does overlap info given in several other sections. This is designed to be a concise compilation for those who are having difficulty understanding The Shadowolf.

I have come to realize that many people think of SHado as a bit OP or toolbox-ish. Shado is not a “toolbox” by definition. He does not have a multiplicity of skills; he has only one skill, one ability modifier, and two specialty weapons. He is an extremely well rounded multitool, but not an OP toolbox. I will address these issues below, helping to rationalize all that I have written about him.


His skill (since his metal powers are one of the main issues here, I presume) is relatively easy to get around if you know what you are doing –

First, he does not control all metals. Modern alloys, titanium, and aluminum are some of the most prevalent examples.

Second, he is fully mortal. His strength allows him to take more damage than a normal person, but not much. While he can “coat himself in metal,” at the absolute MAX this is a half inch, and even that is pushing it. After all, he does need to be able to move, expand his lungs, etc. While this sounds like a lot, according to the Smithsonian a 1500’s proto-gun called a harquebus could shoot through well over an inch of steel plate. Though Shado usually uses tungsten (due to its greatly increased hardness), his armor is still mainly for light-to-moderate melee, light handguns, and machine guns.

Third, the metal will never seal off his mouth, nose, eyes, and ears (the outside of his ears are coated, but not the ear canal). Any damage dealt without his armor (or being blocked by his shield) will be fully felt. This includes things that target the exposed parts I just listed

Fourth, if you know even a little science, you will know that his powers help precious little with many forms of damage. Electricity (such as from Vern’s char Agent Gamma’s staff, or an EMP rifle, EMP grenade, tazer, etc.) will conduct through any of his metals (some less than others, but none are insulators). Acid will damage his skin, eyes, nose, and lungs…Flash grenades will blind him. Water will drown him. Napalm (though he is heat resistant, he is not fireproof) will burn him…you get the idea.

Fifth, the size/complexity factor of what he generates cannot be over-emphasized. Shado does not go “bippity-boppity-boop” and make anything he wants appear. He has to create it, and while he is extremely intelligent, and his mind is geared for using his power, he still has a normal brain. Most of what he works with – though often rather large – are relatively simple creations: steel columns, chucks of iron, molten ore, blades and spikes, chains, etc. Sure, if he really wanted to, he could build himself a giant Mecca suit and go on a rampage on his opponents. He will (probably…) never do that, though, since such a creation would literally take days for him to complete, and require insane multi-tasking to make function once he did complete it.

Sixth, his focus can be interrupted. If he is working on a more complex job (like his special weapons), putting too much pressure on him will prevent him from being able to focus well enough to complete his task. In cases such as this, he will usually only be able to use simple creations, perhaps a very basic gun or melee weapon at best.


As for his Lycanic abilities…

First, these are limited to mortal power. He is immensely enhanced, but he is not comic-strip guru. He is fast, but not Flash. He is strong, but not Superman. He can take a lot of damage, but he is not the Hulk.

Second, his senses match those of a wild wolf (except for the fact that he sees in color, and has a human’s range of vision). While his sense of smell, hearing, and sight are vastly better than a normal human, they are not supernatural. Their weaknesses are the same as well. Put a dog-whistle (or similarly high pitched sound) next to his ears, and you will cause his great pain (though not insurmountable). An extremely powerful low pitch (like the sound waves generated by earthquakes) will cause him even greater pain. Pepper spray will affect him more than the average person, even bringing him near unconsciousness with a direct, concentrated blast. (He does not have whis

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Name: The Shadowolf

Abilities:

Abilties (Click to Show)

1) "Dark Metal Powers" -- Manipulation, Generation, and melting/cooling of "dark (aka, dense)" metals (such as steel, iron, tungsten, uranium, etc.)
2) "Special Weapons Mastery" -- Use of a left-arm buckler with a di-gun (one sniper gun, one machine gun) built into it. Also a long-handled tungsten spear. The head has a small amount of uranium imbedded into it, allowing him to throw it like a missile. Both the spear and the buckler-guns can be generated at will. Bullets are logically infinitely generated.
3) "Quasi-Lycanic" -- Exists in a quasi-Lycan state, giving him the respective strength, speed, claws, fangs, hearing, smell, night vision, and "6th sense."
Subdescription of Abilities for clarity:
1) There are several ways this is typically evidenced. One is the use of summoning a steel blades and columns. These can both grow out of the ground (from treacherous needles to megalithic protrusions) and fall like rain. The molten metal can be generated over small to moderate areas of the ground, or fall like "Hell fire and brimstone" in a burst of varying styles. Launching the molten metal onto his opponents, The Shadowolf (Or Shado for short) can also instantly cool it, trapping his enemies in an ice-like grip. If needed, he can cover himself in a body-suite of hardened metal for protection, but this dramatically inhibits his mobility. Lastly, his favorite maneuver is to fire chains from his hands at his enemies. These chains end in a multi-stranded chain-flail that can easily wrap his target in a death-grip, allowing him to fling them about like a calve on the end of a lasso.
2) Little explanation is required, except that he can regenerate any part of his equipment if it is destroyed. Due to the complexity of their design, this is not quite instantaneous, requiring one to three seconds to actually complete.
3) While most of his wolfish skills are self-explanatory, the "6th sense" needs some extra info. Essentially, this is a heightened awareness of the presence of threats (aka if you try to ambush him, he will be aware of you, even if he cannot actually pinpoint where you are) and an slight resistance/strength boost when encountering the supernatural (i.e. demons, magic...you get the idea. This does not apply to straightforward abilities, but to styles such as the RHG Benjamin uses).

Weaknesses:
1) His power of metals is indeed fearsome, and woe be the opponent with a weapon he can destroy. But "light" metals such as aluminum, titanium, and special alloys are entirely out of his range of abilities.
2) His buckler is relatively small, so helps little against area-effect skills. The most he can do is protect his head and upper torso in this circumstance. His spear is weighty, and remarkably deadly when the broadhead meets with his foe's flesh, and he handles it with the utmost of prowess. Unfortunately, this high mass and size that makes it so deadly and melee weapon and thrown missile also renders it rather slow in close action. He will usually either try to do a single, sweeping blow to knock his foes away, or switch to his claws and powers.
3) Despite the many benefits of being part lycan, it also affects his close-combat speed. For one -- or even two or three -- rapid attacks, his foes will find he has remarkable agility and reactions. He is no ninja, though, and will end up on the worst end of the deal in a close, high-speed combat. He will usually try to get out of this situation quickly, or land one massive blow that tips the scales in his favor.

Story:

Maxar and the Reaver (Click to Show)

"The Shadowolf" is not his name. Years ago, he used to be a hero by the name of Maxar. He still fought with the same buckler-guns and spear, but in a fashion like normal hum -- er -- stickfolk. He was a proud son of Alban, a true Highland Celt in the most classic sense. It was his goal to find and destroy every last vestige of the evil that haunted the Northlands, and this brought him to the most critical day of his life. Reports reached him about a portal to the underworld opening within Eastern Mountain Wilderness, a challenge that Maxar simply could not resist. Day after day he moved as swiftly as his feet would carry him, moving closer to doom with each step. Soon he had reached the valley where the locals had seen the portal, and sure enough -- a black, gaping rift shimmered like so much unco oil right in the midst of a morass. True to his intrepid warrior nature, he hurled himself into the gap, and straight into the midst of a fight like no other. Creatures that defy mortal words assaulted him from all sides, yet still he fought on. All the while, a figure hovered on the edge of his vision, a mysterious wraith-like observer. Hours passed, and soon all of the beasts that otherworldly realm possessed lay dead or dying around him...but he was dying too. At this moment the figure approached. Maxar lifted his spear with both hands, the buckler long ago having been shattered by the evil horde. The wraith never emerged from the shadows surrounding it, but spoke, "I am the Reaver. I am a being of strange allegiance -- a master of darkness in service of the forces of light. I oversee these terrible lands, places forbidden for not only the stickman but even the heavenly. Yet I am never allowed to directly interfere, only to see and to moderate. You, however, have done what I could never do, and that is to destroy these nether scum. Your spirit, my friend, is a remarkable one indeed. Soon, you will die...IF left to your own devices. But let me bless you, imbue you with the very powers that I myself possess yet cannot freely use, and make you not only a hero, but an eternal legend. Be warned, they will change you, some for the better, and some for the worse." Maxar thought for only a moment, then cried, "Ah ken it is nae muckle guid fa me t' de! Gie to me all 'at 'e will, an' let mine craig 'e blesst for lang syne!" [This translates from the brogue -- "I know it is not much good for me to die! Give to me everything you want, and let me have the blessings of the time to come."] And that is how he became what he is today.

Personality: Shado is best described by the phrase "Calm waters run deep." On the whole, he is extremely calm and level headed. Still, if you are unfortunate enough to stir up the depths of his soul, beware of the tempest you face. He prides himself on an noble and chivalrous character, though admittedly gives in to the battlelust more than befits a nobleman.

Appearance: See attached picture. [ATTACH]5776[/ATTACH][ATTACH]5777[/ATTACH] I think I just doubled the attachment. Oh well. Also, I know the pic is small...I could not get the larger size to properly upload. Just make good use of your browser's zoom function. :p

Demo:

The Master's Assualt (Click to Show)

The Mystic Master stood in the distance, overlooking a barren, rocky plain. The Shadowolf – his enemy – was surrounded by four of the Master’s warriors: a Mechanist, a Dark Mage, a ElectroMag Elementalist, and a Blade Master. Despite the dim twilight, he had instructed them to be aware of the fact that The Shadowolf would sense their presence, eliminating their chance of surprising him.
The Mystic Master raised his fist, his men nodded, then charged. The mechanist began firing his gatlin gun, the mage and the elementalist also firing their respective weapons and powers. Shado dogded them effortlessly, then, right as they approached, he launched into the air upon the top of a steel column, a profusion of razor-edged blades surrounding the base. The fighters ground to a halt before they impaled themselves, although the dark mage still received a multitude of cuts from the protruding mass.
Shado smiled to himself, the spun on the top of his platform, firing chains from each hand at his opponents. The mage and blade master were able to dodge the flails, while the elementalist was slashed badly by the hooked tips. Most unfortunate was the mechanist, who was fully ensnared by the flail. Shado yanked the chain forcefully, sending the mechanist flying towards him. Encasing his other fist in tungsten, at the moment of impact he smashed the chain-bound fighter, shattering the chains, driving the shards into his victim, and hurling him unconscious back to the ground.
He had little time to enjoy his victory, however, before the blade master and elementalist reached the top of his perch, while the mage launched fireballs at him from the ground. He had enough warning to materialize his weapons, but it was all he could to do block the elementalist’s EMP battleaxe’s heavy blows. The fireballs had little effect, due to Shado’s affinity to molten metals, but the blade master’s dual krii were slicing into his skin, and were apparently not made of a metal he could control. Realizing that his spear was being useless at the range, he coated himself in steel, then dematerialized his weapons. With the krii now dinging harmlessly off of his second skin, he grabbed the elementalist’s arm and flung him into the air, jumping and kicking him off of the column at the same time. The blade master had enough sense to try to retreat, but the steep, polished sides of the high steel column were not making this easy. Shado turned and lunged forward, grabbing the blade master in a choke-hold and plummeting towards the ground at a shallow angle, his coating of steel making him even heavier, and thus falling faster. Held at arm’s length, the blade master impacted first, almost instantly crushed by Shado’s mass. Still, Shado rolled and slid, then stopped his slide by thrusting the warrior headfirst into a column of summoned blades.
The combined impact of the mechanist’s hand cannon, the elementalist’s EMP blast, and one of the mage’s fireballs sent him flying into the blades himself, and experience that would have proved deadly had he not still been coated in steel. Amid the shattered blades, he quickly shed his encumbering armor, and turned on his heel, raining molten iron upon his approaching attackers. This served to delay them long enough for him to rematerialize his weapons. The mage was unfortunate enough to be the closest to him, and with a single sweep of his spear Shado cut him precisely in two. He dodged a blow from the elementalist, jumped backwards, then strafed him with his buckler-gun’s machine gun. As the elementalist staggered backwards full of bullet holes, Shado dematerialized his spear, snatched up the EMP battle-axe, and sent it hurtling with super-human speed towards the mechanist, cleaving off one of his arms.
A unearthly cry from behind alerted him just in time to the fact that the demonic side of the mage had not died along with his physical body, and was out for blood. Shado turned and ran, his speed widening the distance until the beast began to use its hideous wings. With the mechanist having welded over his bleeding shoulder and charging him, he rematerialized his spear and thrust it into the earth, meanwhile encasing himself in a dome of iron and lead. The nuclear tip detonated, blasting both warriors into the distance. To ensure his advantage, he summoned a veritable forest of steel columns to surround him, their polished surfaces turning the whole area into a sort of “Hall of Mirrors.”
To his surprise, it was the elementalist who found him first. He had evidently supercharged his body, overcoming the damage dealt by his numerous wounds. Bolts of electricity arced between his hands. Shado calmly waved his left hand, covering the area between him and his attacker with molten steel. The electricity of the elementalist only served to heat it more, while his headlong rush made him trip and slid sideways into the searing liquid. He screamed and began to try to launch himself into the air, but in that instant Shado cooled and hardened the steel. It contracted as it hardened, crushing the victim’s skull and entire skeleton in mid scream.
The demon now came at him from the other side, but with two quick motions he entangled its wings in chains. Shado fired the ends of the chains he held into the ground on either side of the creature, pinning it in place. He then casually walked up to point blank distance, equipped his buckler and spear, materialized a gold bullet for his sniper-rifle, then fired into the beast’s head. The immense power of his rifle not only killed it, but essentially beheaded it.
Finally, the battered mechanist lunged at him, and in fact managed to land several good blows with his hand-blade before Shado was able to use the spear to knock him into a nearby column with such force that the beam cracked in two. Circuitry failing, the mechanist was almost able to switch to his gatlin gun, but it was too late. Shado stood at a short distance and stared hard at him. Instantly the metal components that filled his body and made him mechanist began to liquefy, boiling him from the inside out. He did not cry out though, and as the world turned black, he heard Shado say, “Don’t worry, warrior. I will not let you die, for though you yet have much to learn, you still possess that rare quality … greatness.”
The Mystic Master had observed the goings on up to this point, and realized that he would have to take care of The Shadowolf himself. He spend through the air, his katana shimmering in the light of his own power. Shado sensed his approach, but even he could not react in time to save himself from the sudden impact. The katana flashed with breathtaking speed until the blade suddenly went limp. Shado smirked, “Katanas are always made with steel, a most unfortunate coincidence for you.”
The Mystic Master was not to be bested by this, however, and proceeded to launch such of fury of power-infused physical attacks that Shado was quite overcome. The Master finally hurled him through several of the remain columns, then pounced on him, pinning his arms to the ground and burying a titanium knife up to the hilt in Shado’s side. He focused all of his powers into the knife, smiling sadisticly and Shado’s body convulsed with the pain. The Master always loved to watch his victims die, and looked Shado dead in the eyes.
Shado laughed, revealing his fearsome fangs, then gave a battle roar. The Mystic Master realized what he had just done, but before he could leave, Shado *CENSORED* *CENSORED* *CENSORED* “Noooooooo!!! AHHHHRGGG!!!” *CENSORED* *CENSORED*. Shado wiped himself clean, carefully polishing his claws and fangs. He turned and gazed at The Mystic Master, who was now little more than bloody shreds scattered over the entire area where they had been. “I don’t like to eat junk food. You should have remembered never to look a wolf in the eyes.”

Battles: None....YET!!! (WHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA.....srry, couldn't help it...)

Points: 0/0/0/0


P.S. .... I hope I did the Spoilers right, otherwise this will be a very long post....

Okay. Let me be the first to say you need to space your paragraphs out instead of having just a huge chunk of text.

Here is an example of what you are doing;

The Mystic Master stood in the distance, overlooking a barren, rocky plain. The Shadowolf – his enemy – was surrounded by four of the Master’s warriors: a Mechanist, a Dark Mage, a ElectroMag Elementalist, and a Blade Master. Despite the dim twilight, he had instructed them to be aware of the fact that The Shadowolf would sense their presence, eliminating their chance of surprising him.
The Mystic Master raised his fist, his men nodded, then charged. The mechanist began firing his gatlin gun, the mage and the elementalist also firing their respective weapons and powers. Shado dogded them effortlessly, then, right as they approached, he launched into the air upon the top of a steel column, a profusion of razor-edged blades surrounding the base. The fighters ground to a halt before the

Mental note: do not fight this person

A guy that controls metal fighting a guy that is made of metal... Would not end well for me ...

Hey Urako, don't quote the entire thing, especially if you're going to talk about a wall of text. :P

Now to the OP, when you say he's Quasi-lycanic you're not being real specific. Are you saying he's a straight-up half-man, half-wolf? Or are you saying it's more like 3/4 man, 1/4 wolf? I imagine it's the former but just for clarity..

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Now to the OP, when you say he's Quasi-lycanic you're not being real specific. Are you saying he's a straight-up half-man, half-wolf? Or are you saying it's more like 3/4 man, 1/4 wolf? I imagine it's the former but just for clarity..

I think it's more like Kemonomimi in anime, where the person only has the external features of an animal, like cat ears and wolf tails.

And if that's the case, Shadowolf, then at least say that he just has wolf features (e.g. ears, tail, face) instead of putting it on fractions. It's much simpler that way.

About your picture attachments, they were both invalid when i clicked on them.

I know it sounds like i'm just criticizing your character, but i'm trying to help. I'm sorry if i come across as harsh. But the changes are helpful.

Okay guys, thanks for the feedback!

First, I fixed the pics (I think. Tell me if it still doesn't work).
Second off, I fixed the text blocks.
Third, I will clarify the "Censored." I have encountered in the past people who find the use of claws and fangs offensive, so that is what I censored. I never, EVER use foul language (with the possible exception of when I whack/smash myself with something REALLLY hard by accident....). I write clean.
Fourth,....quasi-Lycan. I say this to indicate that he is not a pure beast, but neither is he just a wolf look alike. His features are wolf-ish, AND so are his abilities. His personality can also turn wolfish if he is spurred into too much of a rage...but this is rare (though see fight for what happens...).
Fifth, ... Urako, I love your signature. And though I like my quote the way it is, I am a Christian too and proud of it. Rock on, brother! (XD)

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Okay guys, thanks for the feedback!

First, I fixed the pics (I think. Tell me if it still doesn't work).
Second off, I fixed the text blocks.
Third, I will clarify the "Censored." I have encountered in the past people who find the use of claws and fangs offensive, so that is what I censored. I never, EVER use foul language (with the possible exception of when I whack/smash myself with something REALLLY hard by accident....). I write clean.
Fourth,....quasi-Lycan. I say this to indicate that he is not a pure beast, but neither is he just a wolf look alike. His features are wolf-ish, AND so are his abilities. His personality can also turn wolfish if he is spurred into too much of a rage...but this is rare (though see fight for what happens...).
Fifth, ... Urako, I love your signature. And though I like my quote the way it is, I am a Christian too and proud of it. Rock on, brother! (XD)

To be perfectly fair, it wasn't my idea. I got it from someone else:p Also, you could always put it above your current signature. Matter of fact, my character link is right below it.

Also, your post disappeared. You're not the only victim however. Someone else PMed me. I think something is wrong with the servers.

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I write clean.

First off: Respect. I had a pretty good run with that myself, but somewhere across the line I got corrupted.

Other than that, there are lots of gorey thing, so claws and fangs and all that are safe.

Also, no one freak out about the disappearing post. Pretty sure it's just in moderation with the edit

EDIT: But that suddenly gives Urako points for quoting the full thread!

Yep. I just did a new post of it to be safe. So there might be double.... They are Identical thanks to Urako tho!!!

(Lol and don't worry Crank, while I don't use cussing, I have nothing against those who do. Besides, my father was a Navy man for 14 years...that says it all.)

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First off: Respect. I had a pretty good run with that myself, but somewhere across the line I got corrupted.

Muahahahahaha, let the corruption flow through you, embrace it, love it, worship it.

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(Lol and don't worry Crank, while I don't use cussing, I have nothing against those who do. Besides, my father was a Navy man for 14 years...that says it all.)

You try to censor him and he end's up becoming R2-D2, eh?

Alright, time to check out this new character!

So I had a fair look, there's no big flaws with the character, and I usually don't nitpick when it comes to characters since I'm convinced that such things are best left for their creators.

There's a few things I have questions about :

First off, you say he's a Highland Celt (or at least that's the way I understood it). Does this mean he used to be one of the real Celts? (Who, for the record, no longer were a real culture past a certain point in time) If so, how did Shadowolf wind up in our time? Did the package include immortality/agelessness, or did he travel through time somehow? Assuming he's a historical Celt, did he have his guns and uranium tipped spear all the way back then? Because that seems highly unlikely.

Or am I just wrong on these things and are these "Highland Celts" just another of the many different fictional ethnic groups in the little RHG universe? ;)

Lastly, why did he join the RHG? There's not really that many that provide a proper backstory, and everyone's interpretation of the RHG is different, but it's still something I'd like you to think about!

Now these are just all questions to help you get proper insight on your character. What you do with my feedback is really up to you ;3 So most of luck in your future fights, and don't disappoint us.

Also heh, Urako beat me to the paragraphing bit. It's funny, cause he stated that he learned his paragraphing from my works :D. But yes, proper spacing is very important as walls of text tend to scare away most readers, and make the experience less enjoyable for those who stick through ^^

Good questions, Vern.
As for the Highland Celt bit, he is from one of those androgynous time realms that exist only in writer's minds. Then again, if you are willing to accept the fact that first there was a netherworld, second that there was a hole to it, third that he could jump into it, fifth that there is some strange "Reaver" there that could bless him, and sixth that he is now a quasi-Lycan, power-wielding hero...I think that bit of history can be overlooked too.
About getting into RHG, since I started watching the vids over a year ago, I have always thought of it more as a character mentality than a specific organization. Unfortunately, I am lazy and while I would be more than happy to explain some history glitches and how be found RHG, I don't want to update my post again.

Hey there! I'm sad to say I'll have to decline your challenge, but to make up for it I have some CnC for ya if you wish to read it, so here it is!



I hope that this will be useful to ya! Best of luck in your battles!

~Twitch

Hey Twitchy.
I totally agree with what you have said. I have actually tried to edit it twice, but either my log in times out, or real life calls me in. There is a great deal of work to be done, as this page has essentially remained unedited since its inception.
Check back soon, since I will have it updated when I get the time. I have two battles going on, plus just completed my clan tryout, PLUS a major potential involvement with my clan...you get the idea.