practicing with pivot. am i improving?

Nicely done, but it has some errors.
CnC
- Looks like an effortless jump, try making it look like a hard jump so it really looks like he jumped with force.
- The part he hits the ground should be more smoother cause it seems rushed, try making the stick move small by small each frame, but make sure his fall has some force.(Im sure you already know how to make things smooth.)
- Make the head move.
- That pose while he's in mid-air seems kinda impossible to do in real life.
- This is just a small optional thing but try making the hand move even more, to make it look like its real.
You really seem to be improving, i like the smoothness at the start.
Keep improving man

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Nicely done, but it has some errors.
CnC
- Looks like an effortless jump, try making it look like a hard jump so it really looks like he jumped with force.
- The part he hits the ground should be more smoother cause it seems rushed, try making the stick move small by small each frame, but make sure his fall has some force.(Im sure you already know how to make things smooth.)
- Make the head move.
- That pose while he's in mid-air seems kinda impossible to do in real life.
- This is just a small optional thing but try making the hand move even more, to make it look like its real.
You really seem to be improving, i like the smoothness at the start.
Keep improving man

thanks for the tips =3

Try to add some effects and it would be amazing

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Try to add some effects and it would be amazing

Don't listen to this kid.