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Sir Erick

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Jul 20, 2015 5:02 PM #1384900
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this is the most terrifying rhg i have seen so far... and one of the coolest. great job on the demo.


Lolol. Thanks a lot for that. And yeah, scariness is my thing.

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this is so confusing me because my name is Erick too @_@

anyway, nice demo man, i like the dark atmospheres and how smooth your sticks are


What?! Lol. My name is Erick too in real life. Anyways, thanks a lot with the compliments. Appreciate it. :D
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Jul 20, 2015 5:12 PM #1384905
you should make an animation where he finds something boring but he finds interesting, and stares at it for like a month until someone gets in the way and he cant see it and then he just looks at the guy as he walks away unaware of his impending death and Dopplganger gives him that "what the f**k dude" look and then he just rips him apart.

that would be hilarious
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Jul 20, 2015 5:15 PM #1384906
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you should make an animation where he finds something boring but he finds interesting, and stares at it for like a month until someone gets in the way and he cant see it and then he just looks at the guy as he walks away unaware of his impending death and Dopplganger gives him that "what the f**k dude" look and then he just rips him apart.

that would be hilarious


Lolol. I'll try that next time. xD
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Jul 20, 2015 5:21 PM #1384910
Wow, your RHG has quite a pleasant face there. Does it want a hug?
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Jul 20, 2015 5:21 PM #1384911
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Wow, your RHG has quite a pleasant face there. Does it want a hug?


Yes, Why not? He needs some cuddling. Lol. Thanks for the compliment though. :D
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Jul 20, 2015 5:40 PM #1384921
Snip snap paddywack give the dude a CC.


Powers:

Imitate: Eeh, a bit unoriginal using the OTHER guy's stuff, but I guess if you do it to a lesser extent than them it could be plausib-

Enhancement: Fuck off.

Dead Body: Immortality is a big thing, but being unable to see/smell/taste/hear OR touch is a big weakness in itself. The guy's like a less-helpful hellen keller. Even if you OP'd him out he'd still be inable to do jack shit.

Heightened Senses: Blind people can "see" through sonar. They lose one sense so they double the capabilities of another. Your guy has no senses. There is no way he can be able to do this. Dshgh.

Intimidating Appearance: This sounds alright, actually. Noice.

Regenerate: Whyyy. Dead bodies don't regenerate. This is shitey. Can't you just have him, like, re-attach limbs at the most?


Weaknesses (which are actually all just limits):

Imitate: Oh, for only one ability. And I guess he wouldn't be able to copy swords and stuff since they're external things, he'd only be able to copy innate abilities. Sounds good.

Enhancement: This is a small weakness for an OP ability. Nawh.

Dead Body: Fun fact, dead people can't regenerate bullets either. In fact bullets shred through muscle and bone and can seriously fuck things up.

Heightened Senses: haha it's funny because he's enhancing all of his senses, all zero of them.

Intimidating Appearance: One of my favorite abilities of this dude. This limit makes sense.

Regenerate: A large regeneration delay yet "bullets don't affect him because he can regenerate it fast" so which is which?



Enhancement is an OP ability. You need to give him at least _one_ sense in order to see somehow. Hearing lets you do sonar like blind people (like my own RHG,) smell lets you follow scent trails, touch lets you feel about, taste would let you taste the air like a snake or somethin'.

So sure, your guy has his good points, twice the bad points. I'd give 3/10.
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Jul 20, 2015 6:20 PM #1384933
Cool, love the style, good luck in future battles!
Sir Erick

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Jul 20, 2015 10:23 PM #1385015
A very long critism (Click to Show)


Well. If you read my story. It says escaped "experimental figure" and I didn't say he's immortal. I didn't say he's dead either. You could see I put a " in the word dead. Which means he is like half-alive. So yeah. Also, limits are weaknesses. I don't see anything wrong about it. By the way, i have been planning on posting this RHG for a year now and I wasn't able to do it due to some problems I encountered in my personal life. And what I mean "his senses don't work" it really means. He cant really use his senses like a normal person which is as you can say "don't work".

But thanks anyways for dropping by and giving some point outs on my RHG. Appreciate it. :)
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Cool, love the style, good luck in future battles!


Wow thanks a lot for that. Credits to some help I've earned by some animators. :D
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Jul 20, 2015 10:25 PM #1385016
I cared about the balance, not the story. If he's half-alive, say he's half-alive. If he still has senses, don't say he has none.
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Jul 20, 2015 10:27 PM #1385018
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I cared about the balance, not the story. If he's half-alive, say he's half-alive. If he still has senses, don't say he has none.


Well, it's much easier to point out he has none since it doesn't work like that of a normal human being. So yeah. :D
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Jul 20, 2015 10:34 PM #1385021
say "the way his senses work, dont function like a regular human"
Sir Erick

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Jul 20, 2015 10:35 PM #1385024
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say "the way his senses work, dont function like a regular human"


Hmm. That works. I'll do it once I'm on a PC. :D. Thanks.
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Jul 20, 2015 10:37 PM #1385027
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Well, it's much easier to point out he has none since it doesn't work like that of a normal human being. So yeah. :D


It'd be a lot more understandable and make an overall better rhg if you actually explained it though. Never take shortcuts, always make your rhg the best it can, otherwise no one wants to fight you ^_^
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Jul 20, 2015 10:41 PM #1385029
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It'd be a lot more understandable and make an overall better rhg if you actually explained it though. Never take shortcuts, always make your rhg the best it can, otherwise no one wants to fight you ^_^


What?! Well I still don't want to fight anyone yet but I'll make it better as best as I can. Thanks a lot though. ^_^
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Jul 20, 2015 10:43 PM #1385032
Cool RHG man. The picture of him is really good. I also like his abilities and overall concept.
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