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iven tho dis is e skets, pls cnc. ai rly nid it :) tenks
if u du kritiks, ples spesifai it en tel mi wat tu du (eksep onli "prektis". spesifai wat kain of prektis )

Holy shit, are you doing this on purpose?

You are, aren't you?

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Holy shit, are you doing this on purpose?

You are, aren't you?

yes. for practice. What else? Fashion design?
anywy, cnc ples

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yes. for practice. What else? Fashion design?
anywy, cnc ples

I meant your skill in the English spelling and grammar.

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iven tho dis is e skets, pls cnc. ai rly nid it :) tenks
if u du kritiks, ples spesifai it en tel mi wat tu du (eksep onli "prektis". spesifai wat kain of prektis )

I might be able to translate this...

"Even though this is sketches, please cnc. I really need it :) Tanks. (He loves that Tanky game or whatever it's called)
If you do critic, please specify it and tell me what to do. (except only "practice". Specify what kind of practice )"

And also I think the art is perfectly fine and amazing but the left leg (or right if your looking straight on) looks a little eh. It kinda looks like it's about to bend the wrong way or something. So I guess practice on body parts? I don't know how to say it but I guess work on poses. I'm not a very good artist.

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I meant your skill in the English spelling and grammar.

oh. i love to do that lewl

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I might be able to translate this...

"Even though this is sketches, please cnc. I really need it :) Tanks. (He loves that Tanky game or whatever it's called)
If you do critic, please specify it and tell me what to do. (except only "practice". Specify what kind of practice )"

And also I think the art is perfectly fine and amazing but the left leg (or right if your looking straight on) looks a little eh. It kinda looks like it's about to bend the wrong way or something. So I guess practice on body parts? I don't know how to say it but I guess work on poses. I'm not a very good artist.

nyess b0ss. u got it right. hmmm the leg was meant to be like that since it placed on the back of the other leg i suppose >_> but yea i rly need to learn about proportion xD thanks for it!

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iven tho dis is e skets, pls cnc. ai rly nid it :) tenks
if u du kritiks, ples spesifai it en tel mi wat tu du (eksep onli "prektis". spesifai wat kain of prektis )

Translation: even though this is a sketch, please cnc. I really need it :) thanks. If you do critique, please specify it then tell me what to do (except only "practice". Specify what kind of practice)

I speak fluent MLG.

Anyway I like the art

Thats pretty good. My turn:

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nyess b0ss. u got it right. hmmm the leg was meant to be like that since it placed on the back of the other leg i suppose >_> but yea i rly need to learn about proportion xD thanks for it!

Translation: I meant to do whatever it is that's wrong with my sketch because my drawing is perfect even though I wanted CnC so I guess what I really wanted was people to say I'm awesome, but I'll be humble about it because nobody's perfect.



Also, the left arm looks like it hurts. Are you going to say you did that on purpose as well?

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Translation: even though this is a sketch, please cnc. I really need it :) thanks. If you do critique, please specify it then tell me what to do (except only "practice". Specify what kind of practice)

I speak fluent MLG.

Anyway I like the art

tenks

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Thats pretty good. My turn:



Translation: I meant to do whatever it is that's wrong with my sketch because my drawing is perfect even though I wanted CnC so I guess what I really wanted was people to say I'm awesome, but I'll be humble about it because nobody's perfect.



Also, the left arm looks like it hurts. Are you going to say you did that on purpose as well?

how can u understand me so much :'^) pls love me.
Yes i did that on purpose :)

-Your crosshatching does a poor job of showing how it would look shaded. Highlights and normal areas are too similar, making it a bit confusing to look at. In particular, the hair.
-The eyes are strange. I think it's because of how she's cross-eyed. I have no problem if people have ocular conditions, just accept that you will be judged.
-The left leg (one on the right) is higher up, which explains it being shorter, but doesn't explain why her skirt rides down lower on it.
-Left arm (one on the right) as well as the right arm (one of the left) don't really give off the appearance of having sleeves on them. It looks kind of like she sprayed on some sleeves, which leads to me thinking she's actually naked, which is only a problem because I can see nothing lewd. You ass.
-Purse blends in way too much. Maybe some stronger lines to emphasize it.
-Why does the ribbon have a second outline? It looks weird to me.

-I actually really love the shoes. Feet look great overall in them. 10/10 would get footjob from those feet.

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-Your crosshatching does a poor job of showing how it would look shaded. Highlights and normal areas are too similar, making it a bit confusing to look at. In particular, the hair.
-The eyes are strange. I think it's because of how she's cross-eyed. I have no problem if people have ocular conditions, just accept that you will be judged.
-The left leg (one on the right) is higher up, which explains it being shorter, but doesn't explain why her skirt rides down lower on it.
-Left arm (one on the right) as well as the right arm (one of the left) don't really give off the appearance of having sleeves on them. It looks kind of like she sprayed on some sleeves, which leads to me thinking she's actually naked, which is only a problem because I can see nothing lewd. You ass.
-Purse blends in way too much. Maybe some stronger lines to emphasize it.
-Why does the ribbon have a second outline? It looks weird to me.

-I actually really love the shoes. Feet look great overall in them. 10/10 would get footjob from those feet.

that's a lot XD thank you sir :)
still configuring how to fix those lol

Jesus I don't even want to look at whatever you drew after seeing how you type. It's not funny or amusing. You just come off as a fucking retard.

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Jesus I don't even want to look at whatever you drew after seeing how you type. It's not funny or amusing. You just come off as a fucking retard.

My initial thoughts. Then I saw that little was actually being said, so after getting a pep talk, I decided to just

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Jesus I don't even want to look at whatever you drew after seeing how you type. It's not funny or amusing. You just come off as a fucking retard.

well ok then :D

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My initial thoughts. Then I saw that little was actually being said, so after getting a pep talk, I decided to just

lmao. Thanks for it

Stop trying so hard.