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My RHG DEMO wip

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Phaxtolgia
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Sep 19, 2015 6:39 AM #1404325
I wanted to finish the animation first before releasing my RHG, but i admit i got a little impatient a little later.

So this is a quick 11 second animation I made. For now im just uploading just to see any feedback on it. :L

v1: http://sta.sh/0cbt62a6j6b
v2: http://sta.sh/0moqo1d0ttp
v3: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gTbZXNS2IFk | Mirror: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gTbZXNS2IFk

Few notes:
I made no tweening in this animation except for the gun recovering from recoil.
This is my 4th animation.
I need to stop procrastinating.
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Sep 19, 2015 7:36 AM #1404332
Tweening isn't a must-have, in my animations most of movement is frame-by-frame. Also, your limb movement is fine but kinda isolated, the rest of the body must move when making large movement.
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Sep 20, 2015 5:50 AM #1404474
Your movement is smooth, especially for it only being your fourth animation but it seems a little unnatural and stiff (from what you have so far anyway). Like Tempest said, you should consider moving the rest of the body when animating a movement or reaction. Keep going, and try even more actions next time.
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Sep 21, 2015 6:05 AM #1404647
'preciate the feedback. This is my first time taking anatomy into consideration, but despite so, im trying to make everything flow as good as possible. :L

UPDATE: Uploaded version2 of the wip animation
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Oct 12, 2015 2:26 PM #1408334
i luv ur tweenting style
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Feb 1, 2016 2:12 AM #1434263
Massive bump is massive.

I released my 3rd preview. It is the last preview I'm releasing, and thus the next one WILL be a finished animation. :P

Quote from mr.qu
i luv ur tweenting style


That wasn't tweening.
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Feb 1, 2016 5:01 AM #1434289
Why'd you post 3 versions? All of them are the same.
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