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Sep 21, 2015 2:51 PM #1404688
So for this one I really need CnC on the proportions of the body. I've been trying to draw more often things that involve the full body and I need to know what am I messing up.

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Sep 21, 2015 2:56 PM #1404689
At a cursory glance, I can see that the jacket's left-hand sleeve doesn't seem that right. It gives the illusion that the girl has a short arm even though I can see that her arm's normal.

Maybe it's just me, but her left heel doesn't seem aligned to her right's and her eyes look like they're rotated individually instead of as a pair.
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Sep 22, 2015 1:26 PM #1404885
Her left shoulder looks disjointed, try and cool it on the bagginess remember there's a body under the clothes
Her face seems real squished together
Are you drawing in flash or something because these lines my nigga
She has muppet feet why what

Practice some shapes bruh
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Sep 22, 2015 6:13 PM #1404919
The right knee and upper leg are really flat, and it doesn't seem you put much focus. The hair bugs me a lot, it doesn't really look like two different hair colours, but more like she stuck her head in a slushy machine. Another thing you should focus on is folds, folds aren't just random and all over the place and don't distort the shape of clothing, especially like you did at the right shoulder. And her eyes don't match up, the left is slightly higher than the other.
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Sep 22, 2015 9:52 PM #1404971
Thanks for pointing those out. I'll probably stay away from clothes and coloring for a while. I'll watch some videos and try to draw some poses by myself, I'll comeback here if I didn't screw up xD

TY ♥
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